Re: AD Evaluation: draft-ietf-xmpp-6122bis-22

On 5/20/15 2:29 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:
> Hi,
>
> This is my AD evaluation of draft-ietf-xmpp-6122bis-22. I think this is
> ready for IETF last call, and will start that shortly.

Thanks, Ben.

> I have only one comment of any substance:
>
> -- section 3.1, 4 paragraphs from the end makes normative statements
> about the minimum and maximum length for each part of a JID. But the
> sections for each part repeat those statements, creating redundant
> normative language. I don't see disagreements between the sections, but
> it would still be better to avoid the redundancy.

How about this change to remove the normative statement in §3.1?

OLD
    Each allowable portion of a JID (localpart, domainpart, and
    resourcepart) MUST NOT be zero octets in length and MUST NOT be more
    than 1023 octets in length, resulting in a maximum total size
    (including the '@' and '/' separators) of 3071 octets.

NEW
    Each allowable portion of a JID (localpart, domainpart, and
    resourcepart) is from 1 to 1023 octets in length, resulting in a
    maximum total size (including the '@' and '/' separators) of 3071
    octets.

Peter

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