AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04

"Ben Campbell" <[email protected]> Wed, 24 Jun 2015 15:41:33 -0500
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.xmpp
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Hi,

This is my AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04. There's nothing 
here to block last call.

Thanks!

Ben.

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-- section 3, first paragraph after first numbered list: " ... server 
proves it identity ..."

s/it/its

-- 8, last sentence

With this one sentence, you've made the entire introduction serve as a 
shaggy dog story, without detracting from its main purpose. Bravo. Also, 
groan :-)

-- References:

IDNits turns up several outdated references that probably need attention 
before final publication.