AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04
"Ben Campbell" <[email protected]> Wed, 24 Jun 2015 15:41:33 -0500
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Hi, This is my AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04. There's nothing here to block last call. Thanks! Ben. -------- -- section 3, first paragraph after first numbered list: " ... server proves it identity ..." s/it/its -- 8, last sentence With this one sentence, you've made the entire introduction serve as a shaggy dog story, without detracting from its main purpose. Bravo. Also, groan :-) -- References: IDNits turns up several outdated references that probably need attention before final publication.