Re: AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04

On 6/24/15 2:41 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:
> Hi,
>
> This is my AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04. There's nothing
> here to block last call.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Ben.
>
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>
> -- section 3, first paragraph after first numbered list: " ... server
> proves it identity ..."
>
> s/it/its

Noted.

> -- 8, last sentence
>
> With this one sentence, you've made the entire introduction serve as a
> shaggy dog story, without detracting from its main purpose. Bravo. Also,
> groan :-)

We couldn't resist. ;-)

> -- References:
>
> IDNits turns up several outdated references that probably need attention
> before final publication.

Indeed. Several of the cited documents have undergone revisions since 
February, and draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning is now RFC 7469

Peter

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