WG ACTION: 2 weeks to discuss [LL60] Forward reference style
Erik Guttman <[email protected]> Wed, 5 May 2004 01:05:44 +0200
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Please post discussion of this issue to the mailing list over the next two weeks ending May 18, 2004. In order to accept this issued, we will need a strong WG consensus given that this is very late in the process. Please see http://www.drizzle.org/~aboba/ZEROCONF/issues.html for a list of current issues and their status. [LL60] Description of Issue: Forward reference style Submitter Name: Stuart Cheshire Submitter Email Address: [email protected] Date first submitted: 04 May 04 Reference: Comment Type ['t'ech|'e'dit]: e Prio ['S' Must|1 should|2 may]: 1 Section: 1.2 Rationale/Explanation: Lengthy Description: [Stuart] > When ready to begin probing, the host should then wait for a random > time interval selected uniformly in the range PROBE_MIN to PROBE_MAX > seconds, and should then send NUM_PROBES probe packets, spaced > randomly, PROBE_MIN to PROBE_MAX seconds apart. PROBE_MIN and PROBE_MAX suddenly appear, without mention. Can we give their values FIRST, so the reader has a clue what we're talking about. [Erik] This is standard practice in all RFCs that include constants. We could add text to section 1.2 if you think that this is confusing to implementors. Personally I feel this goes without saying and adding it would only be a matter of (questionable) style. [Stuart] I disagee. What is the harm in helping the reader understand the document better? How can unexplained forward references be good style? Requested Change: Add to section 1.2 Constants are introduced in all capital letters. Their values are given in Section 9.