WG ACTION: 2 weeks to discuss [LL64] Simplify some text

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[LL64]

Description of Issue:		Simplify some text
Submitter Name:                 Stuart Cheshire
Submitter Email Address:        [email protected]
Date first submitted:           04 May 04
Reference:
Comment Type ['t'ech|'e'dit]:	e
Prio ['S' Must|1 should|2 may]:	2
Section:			3.1
Rationale/Explanation:
Lengthy Description:

>    The application knows
>    the source address of the sender to whom the application will reply.
>
>    The first scoped address problem is source address selection. ...

It's confusing. People will think: If the application knows the source
address, how can there be a source address selection problem? How about:

>    The application knows
>    the address of the sender to whom the application will reply.
>
>    The first scoped address problem is source address selection. ...


Requested Change:

Change
>    The application knows
>    the source address of the sender to whom the application will reply.
>
>    The first scoped address problem is source address selection. ...

to:

    The application knows
    the address of the sender to whom the application will reply.

    The first scoped address problem is source address selection.