WG ACTION: 2 weeks to discuss [LL69] Move constants to beginning of doc
Erik Guttman <[email protected]> Wed, 5 May 2004 01:24:53 +0200
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Please post discussion of this issue to the mailing list over the next two weeks ending May 18, 2004. In order to accept this issued, we will need a strong WG consensus given that this is very late in the process. Please see http://www.drizzle.org/~aboba/ZEROCONF/issues.html for a list of current issues and their status. [LL69] Description of Issue: Move constants to beginning of doc Submitter Name: Stuart Cheshire Submitter Email Address: [email protected] Date first submitted: 04 May 04 Reference: Comment Type ['t'ech|'e'dit]: e Prio ['S' Must|1 should|2 may]: 1 Section: 9 Rationale/Explanation: Lengthy Description: [Stuart] >9. Constants > > The following timing constants are used in this protocol. > > PROBE_MIN 1 second > PROBE_MAX 2 seconds > PROBE_N 2 > NUM_PROBES 3 > MAX_COLLISIONS 10 > RATE_LIMIT_INTERVAL 60 seconds Can we list this *before* they are used in the text? Abstractions are great for experts, but not for people learning. Think about children. They learn specific examples first, and then from a collection of specific examples generalize to abstractions. Beginning with the abstract is not the way to inform the reader. [Erik] Listing constants early in the RFC is not common practice. Constants are not abstractions. [Stuart] Using a symbolic identifier in place of a concrete value is not abstraction? Since when? >abB7stracB7tion B B B PB B B Pronunciation KeyB B (b-strkshn, b-) >ignoring or hiding details > 1. Generalisation; ignoring or hiding details to capture some > kind of commonality between different instances. Examples are > abstract data types (the representation details are hidden), > abstract syntax (the details of the concrete syntax are > ignored), abstract interpretation (details are ignored to > analyse specific properties). > > 2. <programming> Parameterisation, making something a function > of something else. Examples are lambda abstractions (making > a term into a function of some variable), higher-order > functions (parameters are functions), bracket abstraction > (making a term into a function of a variable). Requested Change: Move Section 9 to the beginning of the document, say to terminology.