Re: Review request: publicity microflyer

Donald Norwood <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.linux.debian.devel.publicity,gmane.linux.debian.devel.documentation,gmane.linux.debian.internationalization.english
Organization Debian
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Hi,

On 6/5/23 15:19, Znoteer wrote:
> On Mon, Jun 05, 2023 at 03:59:02PM +0100, James Addison wrote:
>> Hi all,
>>
> [snip]
>>
>> I'd like to gather feedback on the wording and content of the flyer;
>> the copy attached to this email is based on the latest edit, and is
>> available in source form from this debian-flyers.git merge request:
>> https://salsa.debian.org/debian/debian-flyers/-/merge_requests/23
>>
> 
> The copy looks good to me. I didn't spot any errors.
> 

Same. If anything I would increase the size of 'Debian' and the logo so the
flyer popped a bit more, though the wording speaks for itself. Good work!

The feedback on it would be great as well, it is always curious as to what
attracts people at events.
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Be well,

-Donald

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