Re: Announcement about the DebConf25 Logo Contest Results

Jean-Pierre Giraud <[email protected]> writes:


>  The voting was not easy, since there were several amazing
> proposals.

this reads a bit stilted, and puts the most important information last,
and doesnt really make a 'point' -- and "voting" is the process rather
than the choosing:

"There were several amazing proposals so chosing a winner was not
easy. We encourage submitters to try again next year"

but: were they really "amazing" or is this hyperbole?


> We are please to
         pleased

> [announce](https://lists.debian.org/debconf-announce/2024/12/msg00000.html)

this url is 1 year old?


>
> The DebConf25 Team would like to take this opportunity to remind that
> DebConf

remind who? "you" / "everyone" ?


>
> Furthermore, we are constantly looking for sponsors.

id suggest "always" or "still" rather than constantly.
and "sponsors for Debconf" (or Debconf25?)

> DebConf is run on a non-profit basis, and all financial contributions
> make it possible for us to bring together a large number of
> contributors from all over the globe to collectively work on

id suggest  "to work together on"