Re: Bug#776190: release-notes: "This", not "That" (on d.o/releases/jessie/)
Niels Thykier <[email protected]>
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Control: forwarded -1 [email protected] On 2015-01-25 10:59, Nick Manini wrote: > Package: release-notes > Severity: normal > > Hello, > the third sentence in the release notes > https://www.debian.org/releases/jessie/ sounds a bit weird: > "That means that things should not break..." > > This sentence refers to the one immediately before, so "That" is > inappropriate. Please use "This" or alternatively "It". > The Italian version has "Questo" and French has "Cela": these words mean > precisely "This", not "That", and convey the correct meaning. > > All the best, and thanx for the great work! > Nick > > [...] Hi Nick, Thanks for reporting this. I am forwarding your request to [email protected] as the page is maintained by outside the "release-notes" source. Thanks, ~Niels