Bug#816159: www.debian.org: new introduction for blends page
Paul Wise <[email protected]>
| Newsgroups | gmane.linux.debian.devel.www |
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On Sat, Mar 5, 2016 at 3:23 PM, Paul Wise wrote: > On Tue, Mar 1, 2016 at 9:18 PM, Charles Plessy wrote: > >> maybe I am too much of a scientist, but I prefer when the first paragraph >> directly answers to the question "what is this ?". I tend to lose interest or >> focus when reading narratives such as the first paragraph you propose below. > > The second paragraph doesn't make much sense to jump right into > without the first paragraph there to introduce it. I've committed the first paragraph and the changes to the second one that were missed.