Re: Mailing to update the CD-Vendor page [replace previous mail]

"Adam D. Barratt" <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.linux.debian.devel.www
Message-ID <[email protected]>
On 2017-06-28 8:31, Alexandre Delanoë wrote:
> Dear Debian CD Vendor,
> 
> The release of Debian 9, code name "Stretch", has been announced [0] !
> 
>     [0] https://www.debian.org/News/2017/20170617
> 
> Then, we are in the process of updating the "CD Vendors" web-page [1]
> on which you have an entry.

I think I can see where "then" came from, but it sounds a little odd in 
English. "Therefore" or "as a result" would be more natural, imo.

> Please reply to this email removing and/or adding your answers:
> 
>                  ----------------------
> 
> 1) Do you still provide Debian supports ?

s/supports/support/

[...]
> 2) Are your informations still relevant on this page [1]:
[...]
> 3) Are your informations still relevant on this page [1]:

s/informations/information/. In this context, "information" is an 
uncountable noun, so doesn't have a separate plural form.

Regards,

Adam
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