Re: Mailing to update the CD-Vendor page [replace previous mail]
"Adam D. Barratt" <[email protected]>
| Newsgroups | gmane.linux.debian.devel.www |
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| Message-ID | <[email protected]> |
On 2017-06-28 8:31, Alexandre Delanoë wrote: > Dear Debian CD Vendor, > > The release of Debian 9, code name "Stretch", has been announced [0] ! > > [0] https://www.debian.org/News/2017/20170617 > > Then, we are in the process of updating the "CD Vendors" web-page [1] > on which you have an entry. I think I can see where "then" came from, but it sounds a little odd in English. "Therefore" or "as a result" would be more natural, imo. > Please reply to this email removing and/or adding your answers: > > ---------------------- > > 1) Do you still provide Debian supports ? s/supports/support/ [...] > 2) Are your informations still relevant on this page [1]: [...] > 3) Are your informations still relevant on this page [1]: s/informations/information/. In this context, "information" is an uncountable noun, so doesn't have a separate plural form. Regards, Adam