new Debian homepage: request for review

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Newsgroups gmane.linux.debian.devel.www,gmane.linux.debian.internationalization.english
Message-ID <[email protected]> 
Hi all,

before starting the translations of the new homepage I like to ask for review
from native speakers. Following pages in the new-homepage branch
([email protected]:webmaster-team/webwml.git) needs to be reviewed:

english/index.wml             (complete rewrite)
english/more.wml              (new page)
english/intro/why_debian.wml  (I completely rewrote this page)

You can see the new homepage at https://debian-newhomepage.larjona.net
It would be nice to get some feedback.
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