Re: release-notes: small fixes to whats-new.dbk

Andrei POPESCU <[email protected]> Sun, 14 Apr 2019 22:01:41 +0300

Newsgroups	gmane.linux.debian.devel.documentation,gmane.linux.debian.internationalization.english
Message-ID	<20190414190141.wld66vgghss37ucd@pine64>

On Du, 14 apr 19, 21:55:48, Andrei POPESCU wrote:
> Hello,
> 
> While reviewing the Romanian translation I found some typos in the 
> English version. There is also one small rewording included so CCing 
> -l10n-english.
> 
> Please find attached a patch generated with 'git diff >'.

Of course it helps if I actually attache the patch :)

Kind regards,
Andrei
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whats-new.dbk.patch (text/x-diff, 2.5 KB)

diff --git a/en/whats-new.dbk b/en/whats-new.dbk
index 3f4bff15..d37b4e52 100644
--- a/en/whats-new.dbk
+++ b/en/whats-new.dbk
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ linkend="obsolete"/>.
 
 <para>
   Besides, buster is the first Debian release to ship with Rust based programs
-  such as Firefox, ripgrep, fd, exa, etc and a significant number of
+  such as Firefox, ripgrep, fd, exa, etc. and a significant number of
   Rust based libraries (more than 450). Buster ships with Rustc 1.32.
 </para>
 
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ code.
     &debian; &releasename; has <literal>AppArmor</literal> enabled per
     default. <literal>AppArmor</literal> is a mandatory access control
     framework that allows to restrict programs' capabilities like read,
-    write and execute permissions on files or mount, ptrace and signal
+    write and execute permissions on files, or mount, ptrace and signal
     permissions by defining per-program profiles.
   </para>
   <para>
@@ -435,9 +435,9 @@ code.
     <literal>iptables</literal> command line interface. The nftables-based
     variant, using the <literal>nf_tables</literal> Linux kernel
     subsystem, is the default in buster. The legacy variant uses
-    the <literal>x_tables</literal> Linux kernel subsystem. Users can use the
-    update-alternatives system to select one variant or the other.
-  </para>
+    the <literal>x_tables</literal> Linux kernel subsystem. The
+    update-alternatives system can be used to select one variant or the other.
+</para>
   <para>
     This applies to all related tools and utilities:
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -473,7 +473,7 @@ code.
     improvements</ulink>.
   </para>
   <para>
-    This movement is in line with what other major Linux distributions are
+    This change is in line with what other major Linux distributions are
     doing, such as RedHat, which now uses <literal>nftables</literal> as its <ulink
     url="https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-us/red_hat_enterprise_linux/8-beta/html-single/8.0_beta_release_notes/index#networking_2">default
     firewalling tool</ulink>.
@@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ code.
     Also, please note that all <literal>iptables</literal> binaries are now
     installed in <literal>/usr/sbin</literal> instead of
     <literal>/sbin</literal>. A compatibility symlink is in place, but will be
-    dropped after the buster release cycle, so hardcoded binary paths
+    dropped after the buster release cycle. Hardcoded paths to the binaries
     in scripts will need to be corrected and are worth avoiding.
   </para>
   <para>

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