Re: new Debian homepage: request for review

[email protected] wrote:
> before starting the translations of the new homepage I like to ask for review
> from native speakers. Following pages in the new-homepage branch
> ([email protected]:webmaster-team/webwml.git) needs to be reviewed:
> 
> english/index.wml             (complete rewrite)
> english/more.wml              (new page)
> english/intro/why_debian.wml  (I completely rewrote this page)

I'm guessing from the fact that plain "git clone" gives me a version
with no "more.wml" and an obviously dated "why_debian.wml" that I need
to do some sort of fancy VCS footwork to get the "new-homepage
branch"; any clues would be appreciated.
 
> You can see the new homepage at https://debian-newhomepage.larjona.net
> It would be nice to get some feedback.

Looks good to me!

(Only a couple of nitpicks: that heading "Get involved, Contribute"
wants a capital "I" on "Involved", and "Additional information around
the Debian community" should probably have s/around/about/.)