Re: [cdrom-detect] Change template proposal

Hi,

Justin B Rye <[email protected]> wrote:
> > "You may want to switch to the shell on the second terminal (CLTR+ALT+F2 in the "
> > "graphical installer, ALT+F2 for the text-based variant) to check the "
> > "available devices in /dev with \"ls /dev\". You can return to this screen "
> > "by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 respective ALT+F1."
>                            ^^^^^^^^^^
> > 
> > 
> > Comments?
> 
> "Respective" is never ever a conjunction in English.  Just say "or".
> 
> And it's CTRL, not CLTR.



john doe <[email protected]> wrote:
> > "You may want to switch to the shell on the second terminal (CLTR+ALT+F2 in the "
> > "graphical installer, ALT+F2 for the text-based variant) to check the "
> > "available devices in /dev with \"ls /dev\". You can return to this screen "
> > "by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 respective ALT+F1."
> >
> 
> "> by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 respective ALT+F1."
> 
> At the very least the above line should be:
> 
> "by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 and ALT+F1 respectively."


Summarizing your comments into one patch, would this be ok?



diff --git a/debian/cdrom-detect.templates b/debian/cdrom-detect.templates
index 2058b0b..ba50e89 100644
--- a/debian/cdrom-detect.templates
+++ b/debian/cdrom-detect.templates
@@ -55,9 +55,10 @@ _Description: Device file for accessing the installation media:
  the device file that should be used. Non-standard CD-ROM drives use
  non-standard device files (such as /dev/mcdx).
  .
- You may switch to the shell on the second terminal (ALT+F2) to check the
+ You may want switch to the shell on the second terminal (CTRL+ALT+F2 in the
+ graphical installer, ALT+F2 for the text-based variant) to check the
  available devices in /dev with "ls /dev". You can return to this screen
- by pressing ALT+F1.
+ by pressing CTRL+ALT+F5 or ALT+F1 respectively.
 
 Template: cdrom-detect/cdrom_fs
 Type: string