[partman-target] proposal to change template to fix bad wording

Holger Wansing <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.linux.debian.devel.boot,gmane.linux.debian.internationalization.english
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Hi all,

I have one more proposal on my agenda for template changes.

"Two file systems are assigned the same label (${LABEL}): ${PART1} and ${PART2}.
resp.
"Two file systems are assigned the same mount point (${MOUNTPOINT}): ${PART1} 
and ${PART2}."

I am of course not a native English speaker, but I believe there is some bad 
wording here? 
I would like to propose the following:



  Template: partman-target/same_label
  Type: error
  # :sl2:
  Description: Identical labels for two file systems
-  Two file systems are assigned the same label (${LABEL}): ${PART1} and
+  Two file systems have the same label (${LABEL}) assigned to them: ${PART1} and
   ${PART2}. Since file system labels are usually used as unique identifiers,
   this is likely to cause reliability problems later.
   .
   Please correct this by changing labels.

  Template: partman-target/same_mountpoint
  Type: error
  # :sl2:
  _Description: Identical mount points for two file systems
-  Two file systems are assigned the same mount point (${MOUNTPOINT}):
+  Two file systems have the same mount point (${MOUNTPOINT}) assigned to them:
   ${PART1} and ${PART2}.
   .
   Please correct this by changing mount points.



As always, debian-l10n-english in CC :-)


Any opinions/comments?

Holger
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