Re: Review request: publicity microflyer
Donald Norwood <[email protected]> Mon, 5 Jun 2023 20:36:54 -0400
| Newsgroups | gmane.linux.debian.devel.publicity,gmane.linux.debian.devel.documentation,gmane.linux.debian.internationalization.english |
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| Organization | Debian |
| Message-ID | <[email protected]> |
Hi, On 6/5/23 15:19, Znoteer wrote: > On Mon, Jun 05, 2023 at 03:59:02PM +0100, James Addison wrote: >> Hi all, >> > [snip] >> >> I'd like to gather feedback on the wording and content of the flyer; >> the copy attached to this email is based on the latest edit, and is >> available in source form from this debian-flyers.git merge request: >> https://salsa.debian.org/debian/debian-flyers/-/merge_requests/23 >> > > The copy looks good to me. I didn't spot any errors. > Same. If anything I would increase the size of 'Debian' and the logo so the flyer popped a bit more, though the wording speaks for itself. Good work! The feedback on it would be great as well, it is always curious as to what attracts people at events. -- Be well, -Donald -- - ⢀⣴⠾⠻⢶⣦⠀ ⣾⠁⢠⠒⠀⣿⡁ Donald Norwood ⢿⡄⠘⠷⠚⠋⠀ B7A1 5F45 5B28 7F38 4174 ⠈⠳⣄⠀⠀⠀⠀ D5E9 E5EC 4AC9 BD62 7B05
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