Re: review of src:sequoia-chameleon-gnupg package descriptions

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Dear Justin,

On Sun, Mar 24, 2024 at 05:10:02PM +0000, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Okay!  Suggested version attached.

<3 thank you very much for that lovely & caring review! I love all your
changes and will upload shortly! =F0=9F=A4=97
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> > Description: Sequoia's reimplementation of the GnuPG cli tools (metapac=
kage)
> An initialism, so definitely capitalised.
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> It's a bit long; maybe the "reimplementation" part can wait for the
> long description:
>   Description: Sequoia's GnuPG CLI tools (metapackage)

agreed.
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> Fair enough, this all looks intelligible.  I'll deal with the quoted
> descriptions below, but notice that one of them is a "what it is" noun
> phrase while the other is a "what it's for" verb phrase - the list
> would read a bit more smoothly if they were syntactically parallel.

I knew you would find these inconsistancies.. thank you.
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> But this is essentially repeating the previous paragraph, while
> slightly contradicting it.  Couldn't we merge the two paragraphs as
> something like
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>  gpg-sq is Sequoia's alternative implementation of a tool following
>  the GnuPG command line interface. It provides a drop-in but not
>  feature-complete.replacement for the GnuPG project's gpg.

YES.

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> The previous two descriptions both talked about themselves as packages
> when it would make things simpler to keep the focus on the utilities
> they contained; this one does some administrative hocus-pocus, so if
> anything it would make *more* sense for it to start with "this
> package" (and an active verb).

:)) thank you, again. I knew it needed someone to look from the distance
to have this perspective and be able to express it / point out whats
wrong with the previous version.

> (g10code?  Oh, okay, "=C9=A110=E1=B6=9C=E1=B5=92=E1=B5=88=E1=B5=89 GMBH".)

well spotted! :)


*thank you*, ***again!***


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cheers,
	Holger

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