Re: Bits post for trixie release, please review and translate.
Holger Wansing <[email protected]> Sat, 09 Aug 2025 18:36:25 +0200
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Hi, Am 9. August 2025 15:58:07 MESZ schrieb Anupa Ann Joseph <[email protected]>: >We appreciate comments, reviews and translations for this post >available here: >https://salsa.debian.org/publicity-team/bits/-/blob/master/content/2025/project/trixie-released.md What irritates me is the paragraph “ Already a happy Debian user and you only want to upgrade?" There is a sentence (the second) talking about fresh install ("Fresh installation ISOs now available ... ") in a paragraph explicitely dedicated to the upgrade way. Either move that sentence into a separate paragraph as "Or want a fresh install?" or change the headline, so it mentions both cases, like "Already a happy Debian user and you only want to upgrade? Or need a fresh install?" Holger -- Sent from /e/ OS on Fairphone3