[lfs] branch trunk updated: grub-efi and kernel: minor text tweaks

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     new 695d81369 grub-efi and kernel: minor text tweaks
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commit 695d81369a6a63ffe557ca91068883292f897091
Author: Douglas R. Reno <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Sun Apr 5 10:52:12 2026 -0500

    grub-efi and kernel: minor text tweaks
---
 chapter10/grub.xml   | 6 +++---
 chapter10/kernel.xml | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapter10/grub.xml b/chapter10/grub.xml
index 4346ddfd5..e02a0b1a7 100644
--- a/chapter10/grub.xml
+++ b/chapter10/grub.xml
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ xorriso -as cdrecord -v dev=/dev/cdrw blank=as_needed grub-img.iso</userinput></
     To set up the boot process following the instructions in this section,
     Secure Boot must be turned off from the configuration interface of the
     firmware. Read the documentation provided by the manufacturer of your
-    system to find out how.</para>
+    system to find out how to turn off Secure Boot support..</para>
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2>
@@ -116,8 +116,8 @@ xorriso -as cdrecord -v dev=/dev/cdrw blank=as_needed grub-img.iso</userinput></
       system to use that partition for
       <filename class="directory">/boot</filename> as well, just mount
       the partition at <filename class="directory">$LFS/boot</filename>
-      in the host distro.  The Linux kernel supports to mount one
-      partition at multiple mount points.</para>
+      in the host distro. The Linux kernel supports mounting partitions
+      at multiple mount points.</para>
     </note>
 
     <para>Leaving <filename class="directory">/boot</filename> on
diff --git a/chapter10/kernel.xml b/chapter10/kernel.xml
index 942c6cb97..639942e0f 100644
--- a/chapter10/kernel.xml
+++ b/chapter10/kernel.xml
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@
       <para>
         If <literal>PARTITION_ADVANCED</literal> is not selected,
         <literal>EFI_PARTITION</literal> will be hidden but implicitly
-        selected.  So don't select <literal>PARTITION_ADVANCED</literal>
+        selected. Don't select <literal>PARTITION_ADVANCED</literal>
         just because you need to boot via UEFI.
       </para>
     </note>

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