Re: Hardened Secure Linux From Scratch book chapter proposals

Bill's LFS Login wrote:
> On Tue, 30 Dec 2003, Archaic wrote:
> 
> 
>>On Tue, Dec 30, 2003 at 07:16:04AM -0500, ashes wrote:
>>
>>>Maybe we can pass this around a bit and see what happens.
>>>-----
>>>Forward:
>>
>>How about something like:
>>
>>Having thousands of computer system security articles available to read
>>on the web, this book was conceived to reduce the noise level by
> 
> 
> "reduce the noise level" carries some implications that I'm not sure you
> intend. Maybe one of the suggested phrasings along the lines of
> "consolidates some of the most important..." would be better?

Or perhaps "distils some of..." or "integrates some of..." 
indicating more than  a collection or compendium of 
materials? I agree "reducing the noice level" conotates more 
than was probably intended, and if it was intended probably
shouldn't be advertised ;-)

jmh

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