Re: f34 docs links to a page for 'rawhide'

Thank you Peter for the feedback.
There are many things that bother me.One, is not related to documentation
Fedora media writer should also include a Fedora ISO download function.  With an enhanced Fedora media writer, I would use it to click onto an ISO image to download, provide it with the USB device or DVD, and let it do both download and write to USB.   It should also check the received iso for download errors.
Here are my grammar rules from my schooling.
write on xxx     On should be replaced with about or onto   as   write about xxx   or write onto xxx 
I write onto a paper.  On can be used as    He is on topic. 

On vs onto,   put the book onto the table. Where is the book?  it is on the table.
Similar distinction between   "in and into" 
In many places   the word see xxxxx   should be refer to xxxxx 
see implies immediate. refer to is an optional deferred action.
AmericanThere are five cars to choose from.International EnglishThere are five cars from which to choose. or 
You can choose from among five cars.
Action statements are better than passive.Download xyz followed by abc  to create the USB.
better thanThe USB can be created by downloading xyz followed by abc.

My sources.English writing class in public school.  And also "IEEE engineering writing and speech guides."
Just my thoughts.

Regards 
 Grandpa Leslie Leslie Satenstein
Montréal Québec, Canada

 

    On Monday, June 21, 2021, 8:20:09 a.m. EDT, Peter Boy <[email protected]> wrote:  
 
 

> Am 21.06.2021 um 13:42 schrieb Leslie S Satenstein <[email protected]>:
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> Downloading Fedora
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> Fedora Editions
> Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site, https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Cloud for scalable infrastructure, Fedora Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user.


Just a remark. That section is wrong for several releases now. As a look at https://getfedora.org confirms it should read:


Fedora Editions
Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site, https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user, Fedora Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora IoT as a strong foundation for the IoT ecosystem.


Cloud is not  offered on getfedora.

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