What not to write in your cover letter

http://whatever.scalzi.com/2011/03/29/i-see-no-possible-way-how-this-incredible-cover-letter-could-ever-fail/
I See No Possible Way How This Incredible Cover Letter Could Ever Fail

*As a preface:* I did not write this. I might have exploded had I tried.

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*[Author and address redacted]*

Dear [Agent / Editor]

Prepare to be blown away.  In your hands you hold the first four pages of my
debut epic, VIOLET THUNDER.  You have the truly unique opportunity to be one
of the first to read a work that will undoubtedly revolutionize the
publishing world.  Borrowing tropes from the epic fantasy, supernatural
detective, and harlequin romance genres, I have crafted the first wholly
original masterpiece in probably at least a century.

I know quality writing, and know a lot of other people who know quality
writing.  A sample chapter presented to my mother’s book club was described
as, and I quote, “like nothing they had ever read before”.  My high school
English teacher told me that I should submit it right away, even though I
only shared the first half of the first draft.

Now, I understand that conventionally you are expecting to see the first
five pages.  I haven’t done that.  Instead I am sending the first FOUR, so
convinced am I that what you hold in your (no doubt trembling) hands is 20%
better than anything you have ever read.  Ever.  Now, I am intimately
familiar with everything you publish, but to avoid embarrassing any of your
other authors I will not name names.  Suffice it to say that when you finish
VIOLET THUNDER it is very likely that you will forget them, and will likely
shit joy and barf rainbows.

My story follows the adventurous life of Sir Reginald Garret Von White
Castle, a 900 year old katana wielding swordfighter from Prussia who,
despite his great age and staggering accomplishments chooses to associate
with and speak exactly like a modern day high school kid.  From the opening
line “I always knew that, in teh end, I would be fucked by unicorns and
glitter” to the mind blowing dénouement, Reginald leads you through a
clandestine world of classic and completely new supernatural creatures who
have all chosen to masquerade as high schoolers in a typical Midwest town
with no defining features or characteristics.  This is so a reader could
easily imagine him- or herself there (VIOLET THUNDER will appeal to both
genders, and anyone who is or ever has gone through a trying transition to
adulthood).

VIOLET THUNDER begins when Reggie’s best friend Bob is kidnapped from the
high school shower after third period gym.  Bob is a figmentationist, a
person who can make anything happen that he imagines, except that it is
never useful or impactful, and generally only functions when it is
convenient for me, the author, to have it do so.  Obviously Reggie isn’t
going to stand for this, so he sets upon a journey of discovery, where he
confronts glowing magic vampires, a succubae sponsored lesbian biker gang,
mean cheerleaders, the sexually repressed high school councilor who is also
a troll, and many other things so shocking that you need to read them in
context to avoid some sort of brain hemorrhage.  In all instances Reggie
starts with banter, but ends with a drawn katana and a decapitated foe.  He
is also a police detective.

Through twists and turns literally nobody has seen coming, Reggie ends up in
a final confrontation atop an incongruous Midwest skyscraper facing down his
ex-girlfriend who now rides a magic unicorn who poops glitter and controls
zombies.  I will not spoil the end for you, but suffice it to say that when
they do it, it is totally hot.  You will be amazed when you finally discover
the totally hidden meaning of Reggie’s VIOLET THUNDER.

Please respond promptly, as I have simultaneously sent this to literally
everyone in the publishing industry that I could find on the internet.  If
you do not happen to be the first person to snap up the rights to VIOLET
THUNDER and all future sequels, I apologize.  Judging by what I think
authors make, this series should totally be worth at least a million
dollars.

Thank you.

[Author’s Name Redacted]

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You may say, *there is no way such a thing could possibly be real*. But ask
any agent or editor if they’ve ever received a cover letter like this. The
answer may surprise/shock/depress you.

Also, in case you weren’t clear on this: Dear writers, never do anything in
this cover letter ever.

*EVER.*

Thank you.



Johne Cook
| http://raygunrevival.com | http://authorculture.blogspot.com |*
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