[proofread] [EN] Router Freedom in Italy

"Richard L. Schmeidler" <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.org.fsf.europe.translators
Message-ID <CAKbK2awGtMUFk0CNBMo94RYciVsvxcdk95WGy1C11a3O3rzX1A@mail.gmail.com>
I have proofread this news item.  I am attaching a version of the
xhtml from your webpreview that reflects my suggestions for
improvements.

1.  "Italy was one of the first countries in Europe to implement
specific rules supporting Router Freedom in 2018."  I suggest
rewriting as "In 2018, Italy was one of the first countries in Europe
to implement specific rules supporting Router Freedom."  My version
says that Italy's action in 2018 was one of the first such actions in
Europe.  In the version as it now stands, a much weaker and much less
interesting assertion is made:  Of the countries that acted in 2018,
Italy was one of the first.

2.  "However, since then, the national regulator AGCOM has introduced
a series of exceptions"  Insert commas before and after "AGCOM."
This suggestion assumes that AGCM is the only such authority in Italy.
If there is more than one, the commas should still be inserted, but
"the" should be replaced by "a."  (And in this case, the commas should
also be removed from the corresponding assertion in the header
paragraph of this news item.)  See
https://wiki.fsfe.org/TechDocs/Mainpage/Translations/Styleguide ,
English Rules #6.

[I know that my suggestions for a variety of rewritings in different
cases look inconsistent, but I have tried to suggest the best English
usage for each case.  As always, I will be delighted to try to explain
my reasonings about English usage -- or anything else -- to anyone who
asks me to do so.]

3.  "In 2020, BEREC has set standardized requirements for national
regulators to evaluate Router Freedom."  I suggest removing "has."
English usage.

4.  "In contrast, the Netherlands and Belgium committed Router Freedom
for all type of networks, following the evaluation criteria proposed
by BEREC."  Insert "to" after "committed."  English usage.

5.  "In 2022, Router Freedom faced another setback in Italy during an
antitrust case ruled by the Italian competition authority AGCM."

(a)  Insert "upon" (or "on") after "ruled."  English usage.

(b)  Insert a comma after "authority."  This suggestion assumes that
AGCM is the only such authority in Italy regulating telecoms.
Otherwise, no change need be made here.  See my #2, above.

6.  "Nevertheless, in 2023, the Italian telecom authorityhomologated
this antitrust agreement, reducing the certification costs."  Insert a
space between "authority" and "homologated."

7.  "requesting ISPs in the country to make the network interoperable
with any router that complies with EU device regulations"  I cannot
read the decision cited.  I am therefore not making any suggestion for
a change to this news item in this respect.  However, it seems strange
that the Dutch regulator would "request" that the Dutch ISPs refrain
from these restrictions.  I would think that the regulator would
require this.

8.  "We claimed that the Italian regulator should apply the BEREC
Guidelines on the NTP to decide on this matter."  I suggest replacing
"claimed" with "argue."

(a)  It is not incorrect to say "claimed."  But although I have not
seen the study, it seems likely that "argued" would be a more
appropriate verb than "claimed."

(b)  If this study is recent and the FSFE has not changed its
position, it would be even better to replace "claimed" with "claim" or
"argued" with "argue."

9.  Countries like Belgian and the Dutch authorities followed this
procedures and have not find any technological necessity to limit
Router Freedom on their
respective countries.

(a)  I suggest replacing "Countries like Belgian and the Dutch" with
"The Belgian and Dutch regulation."  This sentence should either
address the actions of the countries or of the countries' regulation
authorities.  My preference is the latter.  If you prefer that this
sentence address what the countries have done, different rewritings of
this sentence than what I am suggesting will be necessary in some
places.

(b)  I suggest inserting "have" before "followed."  This is not
obligatory, but it better reports that the regulators' behavior is
continuing.  English usage.

(c)  I suggest replacing "this procedures" with "the BEREC procedure."
 (In any event, the mismatch of singular and plural between "this" and
"procedures" should be corrected.)

(d)  Replace "find" with "found."

(e)  Replace "on" with "in."


On Tue, Oct 15, 2024 at 10:28 AM Ana Galan <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Dear all,
>
> we want to publish tomorrow the following:
> https://webpreview.fsfe.org/cgi/fsfe.pl?pad=1286
>
> Dario is translating the report (that we need to link tomorrow) so if
> any of you have time to translate it into Italian would be great .
>
> Best,
>
> Ana
>
> --
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<h1>Exceptions against Router Freedom undermine users’ rights in Italy</h1>

<p>In 2018 Italy implemented Router Freedom. However regulatory 
decisions in 2019 and 2023 introduced exceptions for fiber networks. 
The Free Software Foundation Europe has now urged   Italy’s telecom 
regulator, AGCOM,  to remove these restrictions and fully restore 
users' rights to choose their own equipment to connect to fiber 
networks.</p>

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<p>In 2018, Italy was one of the first countries in Europe to implement <a 
href="https://www.agcom.it/provvedimenti/delibera-348-18-cons">specific 
rules supporting Router Freedom</a>. However, since then, the 
national regulator AGCOM has introduced a series of exceptions 
undermining <a href="/activities/routers/routers.html">Router Freedom 
rights</a>, negatively impacting the rights of 
consumers to use their own equipment to connect to fiber networks. The 
FSFE has [prepared a study on why Router Freedom should be respected in 
Italy](link TBD), urging AGCOM to reconsider its decision based on 
European standardized requirements for Router Freedom.</p>

<h3>Regulatory exceptions and certification procedures against Router 
Freedom</h3> 

<p>In 2019, Italian telecom operators pushed for an 
exception against Router Freedom in fiber networks, <a 
href="https://www.agcom.it/provvedimenti/comunicazione-2-luglio-2019.">which 
AGCOM 
confirmed</a>. This exception significantly limited the ability of 
consumers to use their own modems to  connect directly to the fiber 
network. AGCOM’s decision allowed internet service providers (ISPs) to 
impose the use of optical network terminals (ONTs), with the exception 
of personal routers on bridge mode. In 2020, BEREC set <a 
href="/news/2020/news-20200601-01.html">standardized 
requirements for national regulators</a> to evaluate Router Freedom. 
However, the Italian regulator has not re-assessed its decision. In 
contrast, <a href="/news/2021/news-20210805-01.html">the Netherlands</a> 
and <a href="/news/2023/news-20231113-02.html">Belgium</a> committed to 
Router Freedom for all 
type of networks, following the evaluation criteria proposed by 
BEREC.</p>
 
<p>In 2022, Router Freedom faced another setback in Italy during <a 
href="https://www.agcm.it/dotcmsdoc/bollettini/2022/7-22.pdf">an 
antitrust case ruled upon by the Italian competition authority, AGCM</a>. The 
largest telecom operator in the country, TIM, was requested to allow 
terminal equipment from other ISPs in its fiber network. While this 
commitment would have the potential to establish Router Freedom in the 
country, TIM proposed a certification procedure for any device seeking 
to be connected to the operator’s network. However, the costs involved 
in the certification procedures were prohibitive (around 100.000 
euros), and TIM required that the device should be certified again 
after every software update. Nevertheless, in 2023, the Italian telecom 
authority<a 
href="https://www.agcom.it/provvedimenti/delibera-11-23-cir"> homologated 
this antitrust agreement</a>, reducing the 
certification costs. These certification schemes are contrary to net 
neutrality and open internet, because they create  barriers for 
end-users to use the equipment of their choice. As example, <a 
href="https://www.acm.nl/system/files/documents/beleidsregel-handhaving-besluit-eindapparaten.pdf">the 
Dutch 
regulator ACM decided in 2021 against any kind of obligatory 
certification procedures or device black-list</a> against router 
manufacturers, requesting ISPs in the country to make the network 
interoperable with any router that complies with EU device 
regulations.</p>

<h3>Router Freedom matters – also for Italy</h3>

<p>The FSFE has prepared a [study explaining why it is necessary for 
AGCOM to re-evaluate its position in respect to freedom of terminal 
equipment]. We argue that the Italian regulator should apply the 
BEREC Guidelines on the NTP to decide on this matter. The Belgian 
and Dutch regulation authorities have followed the BEREC procedure and have not 
found any technological necessity to limit Router Freedom in their 
respective countries. The study concludes that allowing end-users to 
choose and use their own terminal equipment supports their best 
interests regarding privacy, data protection and security. Freedom of 
terminal equipment is also key for fair competition, market innovation, 
technical interoperability and digital sustainability.</p> 


<h3>Further material</h3>

<ul>
<li>The FSFE’s request to AGCOM regarding Router Freedom in fiber networks [EN] [IT]</li>
</ul>

<h2>Router Freedom needs your support!</h2> 

<p><a href="/activities/routers/index.html">Router Freedom</a> is the 
right that customers of any Internet Service Provider (ISP) are able to 
choose and use a private modem and router instead of equipment provided 
by the operator. Since 2013, the Free Software Foundation Europe has 
been successfully engaged with Router Freedom, promoting end-users’ 
freedom in many European countries. Join us and learn more about the 
<a href="/news/2021/news-20210330-01.html">several ways to get 
involved</a>. Please consider <a 
href="https://my.fsfe.org/donate">becoming a FSFE donor</a>; 
you help make possible our long-term engagement and professional 
commitment in defending people’s rights to control technology.</p>



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