Re: [proofread] [needs translation] September Newsletter

Ana Galan <[email protected]> Tue, 2 Sep 2025 10:05:17 +0200
Newsgroups gmane.org.fsf.europe.translators
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Hi Richard,

i went through your changes but I am not so happy wtih this one so I am 
making a proposal

On 8/31/25 16:57, Richard L. Schmeidler wrote:
> 2. Table of Contents:  'ilovefs: How we celebrate "I Love Free 
> Software Day" in Potteries, UK'  I suggest replacing "we" with 
> "they."  Elsewhere in the Table of Contents, "we" refers to those 
> responsible for this newsletter, not the FSFE as a whole.  Much the 
> same issue appears in my #8, below.

My proposal is  How "I Love Free Software Day" is celebrated in 
Potteries, UK'

I was not so sure with the they as the idea of that interview (and more 
to come) is to show more our community so I preferred the we referring 
to everyone even if we were not part of it.  So i think maybe in passive 
is easier to have it grammatically correct and still not focus on what 
they are doing but the thing they are doing.

Best,

Ana

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