Re: [needs translation] Page with Mission and Vision
Ana Galan <[email protected]>
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Hi Richard, you were totally right. I fixed it in all languages so there is no part related to our previous activities and about any year. Now it is a bit shorter but i think it looks good. Best, Ana On 11/08/2026 17:44, Richard L. Schmeidler wrote: > I am suggesting extensive and drastic changes to most of the text in > this Mission page. > > I hope that you will give me an an opportunity to proofread this page > when you have revised it. > > 1. "The push for device neutrality will be a cornerstone of our work in > 2025 and beyond." I suggest replacing "be a cornerstone of our work in > 2025 and beyond" with "continue to be a cornerstone of our work." This > phrasing is intended to be applicable now, in the immediate future, and > even in and beyond 2048. The year 2025 is no longer in the immediate > future! > > 2. 'Last year, we further supported public administrations in their > transition to Free Software; in December we were invited to participate > as experts in a hearing in the German parliament; as part of our > watchdog role we held decision-makers accountable for their work in this > area; and in 2025 we will pilot a new event format on "Public Money? > Public Code!".' I suggest removing this sentence entirely. In a > description of the FSFE's vision for the year 2048, details of the work > accomplished 24 years earlier in 2024 and of plans for work to be done > 23 years earlier in 2025 seem to me to be quite out of place. But of > course this is a description of the FSFE's vision for 2048, not my > vision, and the choice is yours. If you do keep the description of the > 2025 plan, it should be written in the past tense. > > 3. "Last year, we were engaged with the Cyber Resilience Act (CRA), the > Product Liability Directive (PLD), the AI Act, the Interoperable Europe > Act, and other regulations." I suggest removing this sentence > entirely. In a description of the FSFE's vision for the year 2048, > details of the work accomplished decades earlier seem to me to be quite > out of place. But again, the choice is yours. But if you retain this, > "Last year" should be replaced with a more appropriate identification of > the time. > > 4. "In 2025 and beyond, we will continue to serve as an independent > voice" I suggest replacing "In 2025 and beyond, we" with "We." See my > #1, above. > > 5. "As in 2024, we will keep providing a safe and neutral space" I > suggest replacing "As in 2024, we" with "We." See my #1, above. > > 6. "In 2025, we will launch a new format for our work on legal > education, in addition to our Licensing and Legal FAQs." I suggest > removing this sentence entirely. In a description of the FSFE's vision > for the year 2048, details of plans for work to be done decades earlier > seem to me to be quite out of place. But once again, the choice is > yours. But if you retain this, "In 2025, we will launch" should be > replaced with a more appropriate identification of the time frame. > > 7. "As well as calling for “Public Money? Public Code!” for the > education sector, we are encouraging young people to code and experience > how much fun it is to shape technology!" I suggest replacing "we are > encouraging" with "we will continue to encourage". See my #1, above. > > 8. "In 2025 we will be conducting the fourth edition of our European > programming competition "Youth Hacking 4 Freedom". In this contest, > teenagers across Europe can win €1024, €2048, or €4096 for their Free > Software project. Our goal is for young people from all over Europe to > see what others in their peer group can accomplish with software, and to > get inspired and motivated. We bring the winners together in Brussels to > celebrate their hard persistent work, connect with each other in person, > receive their awards, have a good time, and show their parents that what > their children are doing is great, even if they might not fully > understand anything about computers themselves. And we help them connect > more with the Free Software community." I suggest removing this > description of plans for 2025. See my #6, above. Plans for 2025 seem > particularly out of place in a vision for 2048 when the 2027 contest has > already been announced. > > > On Tue, Aug 11, 2026 at 6:59 AM Ana Galan <[email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: > > Dear all, > > I have been updating our Mission page so it is including now our Vision > 2048. Currently the page is in English, German, Italian, French and > Spanish (as those were the languages in which I had the vision). > > https://fsfe.org/about/mission.html <https://fsfe.org/about/ > mission.html> > > It would be great if you can proofread it and if possible, update it > into more languages such as Dutch, Polish, Danish... I am adding here > Carsten and Damian so maybe they can ask someone to help with it. > > Best, > > Ana > _______________________________________________ > Translators mailing list -- [email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]> > To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]> > > This mailing list is covered by the FSFE's Code of Conduct. 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