Action item: new wording for Checkpoint 5.2 minimum success crite rion #1
john_slatin <[email protected]>
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Current wording for Checkpoint 5.2, Success criterion #1, minimum level: 1. a list of technologies and features, support for which is required in order for the content to be operable, has been determined and is documented in metadata and / or a policy statement associated with the content. Proposed new wording 1. A list of the technologies and features required to operate the content is associated with the content through metadata and/or a policy statement. -- Explanation: I've tried to make this criterion more understandable by (a) straightening out the syntax and (b) shortening the sentence. I deleted the phrase "has determined and is" on the grounds that the list of required technologies and features can't be provided until someone has determined what those requirements are. What important nuances have I missed? John John Slatin, Ph.D. Director, Institute for Technology & Learning University of Texas at Austin FAC 248C, Mail code G9600 Austin, TX 78712 ph 512-495-4288, f 512-495-4524 email [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> web http://www.ital.utexas.edu <http://www.ital.utexas.edu>