svn commit: r45330 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status
Gavin Atkinson <[email protected]>
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Author: gavin
Date: Thu Jul 17 23:56:33 2014
New Revision: 45330
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45330
Log:
Minor wording tweaks.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml Thu Jul 17 17:32:35 2014 (r45329)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml Thu Jul 17 23:56:33 2014 (r45330)
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
<p>Thanks to all the reporters for the excellent work! This
report contains 22 entries and we hope you enjoy reading it.</p>
- <p>The deadline for submissions covering between July and
+ <p>The deadline for submissions covering the period from July to
September 2014 is October 7th, 2014.</p>
</section>
@@ -752,7 +752,7 @@
engine, which can be integrated with cloud orchestration
systems like OpenStack or CloudStack.</p>
- <p>This work's goal is to enable &os; as a fully supported
+ <p>The goal of this work is to enable &os; as a fully supported
compute host for OpenStack using OpenContrail virtualized
networking. The main areas of development are:</p>
@@ -926,9 +926,9 @@
<body>
<p>SDIO is an interface designed as an extension of the existing
- SD card standard, which allows connecting different peripherals to
- the host with the standard SD controller. Peripherals
- currently sold at the general market include WLAN/BT modules,
+ SD card standard, which allows the connecting of different
+ peripherals to the host with a standard SD controller. Peripherals
+ currently sold on the general market include WLAN/BT modules,
cameras, fingerprint readers, and barcode scanners.
Additionally, SDIO is used to connect some peripherals in
products like Chromebooks and Wandboard. A prototype of the
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