svn commit: r45596 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface

Ryusuke SUZUKI <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: ryusuke
Date: Fri Sep 12 11:34:48 2014
New Revision: 45596
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45596

Log:
  Move "and" to correct location.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml	Fri Sep 12 00:14:46 2014	(r45595)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml	Fri Sep 12 11:34:48 2014	(r45596)
@@ -307,8 +307,8 @@
       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="x11"/></emphasis></term>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Describes the X Window System in general and using
-	  X11 on &os; in particular.  Also describes common and
-	  desktop environments such as <application>KDE</application>
+	  X11 on &os; in particular.  Also describes common
+	  desktop environments such as <application>KDE</application> and
 	  <application>GNOME</application>.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
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