svn commit: r45641 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security
Benjamin Kaduk <[email protected]>
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Author: bjk
Date: Fri Sep 19 15:33:36 2014
New Revision: 45641
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45641
Log:
Massage some igor fixes to improve grammar and readability
Approved by: hrs (mentor)
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Fri Sep 19 00:14:10 2014 (r45640)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Fri Sep 19 15:33:36 2014 (r45641)
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@
</vuln></programlisting>
<para>The tag names are supposed to be self-explanatory so we
- shall take a closer look only at fields which needs to be fill
+ shall take a closer look only at fields which needs to be filled
in:</para>
<calloutlist>
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
<literal><le></literal>,
<literal><eq></literal>,
<literal><ge></literal>, and
- <literal><gt></literal> elements. Check the version
+ <literal><gt></literal> elements. Check that the version
ranges given do not overlap.</para>
<para>In a range specification, <literal>*</literal>
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@
<sect2 xml:id="security-notify-vuxml-testing">
<title>Testing Changes to the VuXML Database</title>
- <para>Assume a new entry for a
+ <para>This example describes a new entry for a
vulnerability in the package <literal>clamav</literal> that
has been fixed in version <literal>0.65_7</literal>.</para>
@@ -467,7 +467,7 @@
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>packaudit</userinput></screen>
<para>To verify that the <literal><affected></literal>
- section of the entry will match correct package(s), issue this
+ section of the entry will match the correct package(s), issue this
command:</para>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>portaudit -f /usr/ports/INDEX -r <replaceable>uuid</replaceable></userinput></screen>
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