svn commit: r45801 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status
Warren Block <[email protected]>
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Author: wblock
Date: Sun Oct 12 21:04:40 2014
New Revision: 45801
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45801
Log:
Edit for clarity and consistency.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml Sun Oct 12 20:53:29 2014 (r45800)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-07-2014-09.xml Sun Oct 12 21:04:40 2014 (r45801)
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
<p>The third quarter of 2014 was another productive quarter for
the FreeBSD project. A lot of work has been done on various ARM
platforms, with the goal of bringing them to Tier 1 status in
- &os; 11 and the various ports teams have worked hard to improve
+ &os; 11. The various ports teams have also worked hard to improve
the state of &os; as a desktop operating system. As usual,
performance improvements feature in several places in this
report and many of these can benefit from user benchmarking to
@@ -634,13 +634,13 @@
USERS. Network configuration, ZFS options, and others are
also included.</p>
- <p>Second part of project is about booting the fai (Fully
- Automatic Installer) from the network by PXE. Made installer
- distro based on mfsbsd. After boot, fai looks for the
+ <p>The Second part of the project is about booting the <tt>fai</tt> (Fully
+ Automatic Installer) from the network by PXE. An installer
+ distro was created based on mfsBSD. After boot, <tt>fai</tt> looks for the
"bootfile-name" parameter from the DHCP server. This
- parameter instructs fai where the bsdinstall script is
- located. Fai supports mac-based config or a default, if a
- mac-based configuration file does not exist.</p>
+ parameter tells <tt>fai</tt> where the <tt>bsdinstall</tt> script is
+ located. <tt>fai</tt> supports MAC-based configuration, or a default if a
+ MAC-based configuration file does not exist.</p>
</body>
<sponsor>
@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@
<body>
<p>The newest graphics stack (that is, ports behind the
- WITH_NEW_XORG knob) was enabled on all architectures. The
+ <tt>WITH_NEW_XORG</tt> knob) was enabled on all architectures. The
only regression is for users of Intel GPUs and &os; 8.X or
9.0. Those releases lack the required kernel driver and
therefore <tt>xf86-video-intel</tt> will not work (the last
@@ -972,7 +972,7 @@
<body>
<p>Work on initial support of the IFC6410 board, which was
- stopped due to bricked bootloader, has been started again.
+ stopped due to a bricked bootloader, has been started again.
This board has the Qualcomm Snapdragon S4 SoC, featuring the
Krait CPU. This CPU is considered a "platform" for use in
smartphones, tablets, and smartbook devices. Krait has many
@@ -2077,8 +2077,8 @@
<p>This project aims to add support to the &os; kernel for
running in Xen Paravirtualised mode on amd64 systems. This
project has finally reached a "Proof of Concept" stage on the
- branch <a
- href="http://svnweb.freebsd.org/base/projects/amd64_xen_pv/">projects/amd64_xen_pv</a></p>
+ branch
+ <url href="http://svnweb.freebsd.org/base/projects/amd64_xen_pv/">projects/amd64_xen_pv</url>.</p>
<p>Testing and bug reports on various configurations is
encouraged! The author is also seeking bounties to help
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