svn commit: r46047 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks
Benedict Reuschling <[email protected]>
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Author: bcr
Date: Tue Dec 2 11:26:58 2014
New Revision: 46047
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46047
Log:
Remove redundant markup and words in a sentence. Provide proper
capitalization in title tags.
Obtained from: igor(8) output
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml Tue Dec 2 11:15:50 2014 (r46046)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml Tue Dec 2 11:26:58 2014 (r46047)
@@ -1604,8 +1604,8 @@ scsibus1:
<para>Instead, one can use <command>dump</command> and
<command>restore</command> in a more secure fashion over an
<acronym>SSH</acronym> connection. This example creates a
- full, compressed backup of the <filename>/usr</filename> file
- system and sends the backup file to the specified host over a
+ full, compressed backup of <filename>/usr</filename> and sends
+ the backup file to the specified host over a
<acronym>SSH</acronym> connection.</para>
<example>
@@ -1656,7 +1656,7 @@ scsibus1:
same directory that is being backed up.</para>
<example>
- <title>Backing Up the Current Directory With
+ <title>Backing Up the Current Directory with
<command>tar</command></title>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>tar czvf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.tgz</replaceable> . </userinput></screen>
@@ -1670,7 +1670,7 @@ scsibus1:
backup to restore.</para>
<example>
- <title>Restoring Up the Current Directory With
+ <title>Restoring Up the Current Directory with
<command>tar</command></title>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>tar xzvf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.tgz</replaceable></userinput></screen>
@@ -1728,7 +1728,7 @@ scsibus1:
examples would be:</para>
<example>
- <title>Backing Up the Current Directory With
+ <title>Backing Up the Current Directory with
<command>pax</command></title>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pax -wf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.pax</replaceable> .</userinput></screen>
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