svn commit: r46061 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: advanced-networking bsdinstall geom security

Author: bcr
Date: Wed Dec  3 20:32:03 2014
New Revision: 46061
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46061

Log:
  Change some sentences where it makes sense to remove the redundant
  filename and word.  Translators can ignore this.
  
  Obtained from:	    igor -E output

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Wed Dec  3 20:04:29 2014	(r46060)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Wed Dec  3 20:32:03 2014	(r46061)
@@ -2194,7 +2194,7 @@ freebsdap       00:11:95:c3:0d:ac    1  
 
 	  <para>Debugging support is provided by
 	    &man.wpa.supplicant.8;.  Try running this utility manually
-	    with the <option>-dd</option> option and look at the
+	    with <option>-dd</option> and look at the
 	    system logs.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
@@ -4294,8 +4294,8 @@ cd /usr/src/etc; make distribution</prog
 	<step>
 	  <para>On the
 	    <acronym>TFTP</acronym> server, read
-	    <filename>/var/log/xferlog</filename> to ensure that the
-	    <filename>pxeboot</filename> file is being retrieved from
+	    <filename>/var/log/xferlog</filename> to ensure that
+	    <filename>pxeboot</filename> is being retrieved from
 	    the correct location.  To test this example
 	    configuration:</para>
 

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Wed Dec  3 20:04:29 2014	(r46060)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Wed Dec  3 20:32:03 2014	(r46061)
@@ -1451,10 +1451,10 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID
 
       <para>Multiple file system partitions can be created and some
 	people prefer a traditional layout with separate partitions
-	for the <filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>,
-	<filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename> file
-	systems.  See <xref linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/>
-	for an example.</para>
+	for <filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>,
+	<filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename>.  See
+	<xref linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/> for an
+	example.</para>
 
       <para>The <literal>Size</literal> may be entered with common
 	abbreviations: <emphasis>K</emphasis> for kilobytes,

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml	Wed Dec  3 20:04:29 2014	(r46060)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml	Wed Dec  3 20:32:03 2014	(r46061)
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ Done.</screen>
 	uses a traditional file system layout, with partitions for
 	<filename>/</filename>, swap, <filename>/var</filename>,
 	<filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename>.  A
-	single <filename>/</filename> file system and a swap partition
+	single <filename>/</filename> and a swap partition
 	will also work.</para>
 
       <para>Partitions on the mirror do not have to be the same size

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Wed Dec  3 20:04:29 2014	(r46060)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Wed Dec  3 20:32:03 2014	(r46061)
@@ -427,8 +427,8 @@ Enter new password:</screen>
 
       <para>After installation of this package or port, the system may
 	be checked using the following command.  It will produce a lot
-	of information and will require some manual pressing of the
-	<keycap>ENTER</keycap> key:</para>
+	of information and will require some manual pressing of
+	<keycap>ENTER</keycap>:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>rkhunter -c</userinput></screen>
 
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