svn commit: r46433 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion
Eitan Adler <[email protected]>
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Author: eadler
Date: Thu Apr 2 23:44:36 2015
New Revision: 46433
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46433
Log:
compiz-fusion: remove snark
rewrite abstract to not be snarky and to better explain the point of the
article.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml Thu Apr 2 23:36:26 2015 (r46432)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/compiz-fusion/article.xml Thu Apr 2 23:44:36 2015 (r46433)
@@ -24,18 +24,12 @@
</legalnotice>
<abstract>
- <para>The Linux world has been overwhelmed lately by what seems to be
- the latest fashion: 3D Desktop effects. While their usefulness is
- rather heavily debated, the wow factor behind the composited desktop
- holds quite well. Several different programs have emerged, like
- <link xlink:href="http://compiz.org/"><application>Compiz</application></link>,
- <link xlink:href="http://www.beryl-project.org/"><application>Beryl</application></link>,
- and the latest <link xlink:href="http://www.compiz-fusion.org/"><application>Compiz Fusion</application></link>.
- You do not need to miss these effects when using &os;. These
- instructions will help you install and configure your system for the
- latest 3D desktop experience using
- <application>Compiz Fusion</application> and nVidia drivers
- (if applicable).</para>
+ <para>One way to increase the pleasantness of using a desktop
+ computer is by having nice 3D effects.
+ This article walks through the installation
+ <application>Compiz</application> which is one example
+ program which to produce nice effects. It assumes the use of
+ nVidia drivers, although these are not required.</para>
</abstract>
</info>
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