Re: svn commit: r46400 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall

Eitan Adler <[email protected]>
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On 3 April 2015 at 12:51, John Baldwin <[email protected]> wrote:
> On Wednesday, April 01, 2015 05:08:32 AM Eitan Adler wrote:
>> Author: eadler
>> Date: Wed Apr  1 05:08:31 2015
>> New Revision: 46400
>> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46400
>>
>> Log:
>>   Minimum Hardware Requirements: installation instructions
>>
>>   Sacrifice some technical pedanticness to simplify the description of amd64 and
>>   i386.  For the users whom are actually confused as to which system they should
>>   use, using more plain language (such as 32-bit vs 64-bit) and referencing the
>>   vendors directly would be more helpful.
>>
>>   Also, stop mentioning that both UP and SMP are supported.  OpenBSD finished that
>>   project in 2004.
>
> Mostly looks good, some nits:
...

Excellent.  I've implemented your suggestions in r46452.


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Eitan Adler
Source, Ports, Doc committer
Bugmeister, Ports Security teams
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