svn commit: r46820 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11

Author: bcr
Date: Fri Jun 12 12:43:37 2015
New Revision: 46820
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46820

Log:
  Make textproc/igor happy by:
  
  - removing redundant markup and word
  - fixing capitalization (where possible)
  
  Discussed with:	    wblock

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml	Fri Jun 12 12:33:15 2015	(r46819)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml	Fri Jun 12 12:43:37 2015	(r46820)
@@ -1240,10 +1240,10 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort:     0</scree
       are not described in the port's documentation.</para>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="x-compiz-video-card">
-      <title>Setting up the &os; nVidia driver</title>
+      <title>Setting up the &os; nVidia Driver</title>
 
       <para>Desktop effects can cause quite a load on the graphics
-	card.  For an an nVidia-based graphics card, the proprietary
+	card.  For an nVidia-based graphics card, the proprietary
 	driver is required for good performance.  Users of other
 	graphics cards can skip this section and continue with the
 	<filename>xorg.conf</filename> configuration.</para>
@@ -1277,8 +1277,8 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort:     0</scree
       </note>
 
       <para>With the kernel module loaded, you normally only need to
-	change a single line in your <filename>xorg.conf</filename>
-	file to enable the proprietary driver:</para>
+	change a single line in <filename>xorg.conf</filename>
+	to enable the proprietary driver:</para>
 
       <para>Find the following line in
 	<filename>/etc/X11/xorg.conf</filename>:</para>
@@ -1294,7 +1294,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort:     0</scree
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="xorg-configuration">
-      <title>Configuring xorg.conf for desktop effects</title>
+      <title>Configuring xorg.conf for Desktop Effects</title>
 
       <para>To enable <application>Compiz&nbsp;Fusion</application>,
 	<filename>/etc/X11/xorg.conf</filename> needs to be
@@ -1361,7 +1361,7 @@ DisplayManager.requestPort:     0</scree
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="compiz-fusion">
-      <title>Installing and configuring Compiz&nbsp;Fusion</title>
+      <title>Installing and Configuring Compiz&nbsp;Fusion</title>
 
       <para>Installing <application>Compiz&nbsp;Fusion</application>
 	is as simple as any other package:</para>
@@ -1736,8 +1736,8 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
 	    </question>
 
 	    <answer>
-	      <para>If you check your
-		<filename>/var/log/Xorg.0.log</filename> file, you
+	      <para>If you check
+		<filename>/var/log/Xorg.0.log</filename>, you
 		will probably find error messages during the X
 		startup.  The most common would be:</para>
 
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