svn commit: r46961 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status
Warren Block <[email protected]>
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Author: wblock
Date: Mon Jul 13 15:52:55 2015
New Revision: 46961
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46961
Log:
Slight update to the summary to reduce redundancy. We should reconsider
whether the introduction really needs to summarize all the individual
reports.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml Mon Jul 13 13:27:06 2015 (r46960)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml Mon Jul 13 15:52:55 2015 (r46961)
@@ -25,11 +25,11 @@
June 2015. This is the second of four reports planned for
2015.</p>
- <p>The second quarter of 2015 was another productive quarter for
- the &os; project and community. BSDCan was held in Ottawa in
- June, and both it and the Developer Summit preceding it allowed
- developers to plan for the future and discover what others have
- already accomplished.</p>
+ <p>Another productive quarter for the &os; project and community
+ has passed. BSDCan was held in Ottawa in June, and both it and
+ the preceding Developer Summit allowed developers to plan for
+ the future and discover what others have already
+ accomplished.</p>
<p>Thanks to all the reporters for the excellent work!</p>
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