svn commit: r47007 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Christian Brueffer <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: brueffer
Date: Fri Jul 17 15:38:01 2015
New Revision: 47007
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47007

Log:
  Fix typos and grammar; spell FreeBSD in email addresses consistently.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml	Fri Jul 17 14:50:55 2015	(r47006)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml	Fri Jul 17 15:38:01 2015	(r47007)
@@ -455,7 +455,7 @@
 	back in sync with their English reference chapters:
 	filesystems and ZFS.  The former was mainly done by Bj&ouml;rn
 	Heidotting as part of his mentee process.  The latter was done
-	by Benedict Reuschling, which valuable corrections by
+	by Benedict Reuschling, with valuable corrections by
 	Bj&ouml;rn.</p>
 
       <p>Additionally, we updated many of our translation markers from
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@
     </links>
 
     <body>
-      <p>The aim of this project is to design and implement a
+      <p>The aim of this project is to design and implement an
 	infrastructure to validate that a number of the network
 	stack's multiqueue behaviours are as expected.</p>
 
@@ -627,7 +627,7 @@
 	Release Engineering tools now natively support producing
 	&os;/arm images without external build tools.</p>
 
-      <p>At present, the build tools are support building &os;/arm
+      <p>At present, the build tools support building &os;/arm
 	images for:</p>
 
       <ul>
@@ -917,7 +917,7 @@
 
       <p>During this period we had two new commit bits awarded, and
 	one taken in for safekeeping.  Welcome aboard to Chris Torek
-	and Mariusz Zeborski, and we were very sorry indeed to see
+	and Mariusz Zaborski, and we were very sorry indeed to see
 	Steve Kargl decide to call it a day.</p>
     </body>
   </project>
@@ -1166,7 +1166,7 @@
 	movement using the hardware offload capabilities of Mellanox's
 	10, 40, 56 and 100 Gigabit IB/Ethernet adapters.</p>
 
-      <p>Remote Direct Memory Access (RDMA) have been shown to have a
+      <p>Remote Direct Memory Access (RDMA) has been shown to have a
 	great value for storage applications.  RDMA infrastructure
 	provides benefits such as Zero-Copy, CPU offload, Reliable
 	transport, Fabric consolidation, and many more.  The iSER
@@ -1230,7 +1230,7 @@
 	boot with a temporary rootfs, configure the kernel to be able
 	to access the real rootfs, and then replace the temporary root
 	with the real one.  In Linux, the functionality is known as
-	<tt>pivot_root</tt>.  The reroot projects aims to provide
+	<tt>pivot_root</tt>.  The reroot project aims to provide
 	similar functionality in a different, slightly more
 	user-friendly way: rerooting.  Simply put, from the user point
 	of view it looks like the system performs a partial shutdown,
@@ -1789,7 +1789,7 @@
 	  <given>Alexander</given>
 	  <common>Motin</common>
 	</name>
-	<email>[email protected]</email>
+	<email>[email protected]</email>
       </person>
 
       <person>
@@ -1797,7 +1797,7 @@
 	  <given>Marcelo</given>
 	  <common>Araujo</common>
 	</name>
-	<email>[email protected]</email>
+	<email>[email protected]</email>
       </person>
     </contact>
 
@@ -1994,7 +1994,7 @@
     <body>
       <p>This is a kernel driver implemetation of the Dallas
 	Semiconductor 1-Wire bus in a generic fashion.  While
-	temperature sensors are the only device initially supported,
+	temperature sensors are the only devices initially supported,
 	other devices should be easy to add.  Multiple devices on one
 	bus are supported.  Both normal and overdrive modes are
 	supported.</p>
@@ -2003,7 +2003,7 @@
 	there is a high bit error rate.  There are indications that
 	this is due to bad bit-read times.  The code is written with
 	enough resilience to cope with the problem by retrying, and
-	the error rate is low enough that a couple of retries papers
+	the error rate is low enough that a couple of retries paper
 	over many marginal issues.</p>
     </body>
 
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