svn commit: r47442 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails

Author: allanjude
Date: Sun Sep 27 21:32:57 2015
New Revision: 47442
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47442

Log:
  Fix grammar in the jails handbook section
  
  PR:		203350
  Submitted by:	Leonhard Campo <[email protected]>
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
  Sponsored by:	ScaleEngine Inc.
  Sponsored by:	EuroBSDCon DevSummit

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml	Sat Sep 26 16:57:40 2015	(r47441)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml	Sun Sep 27 21:32:57 2015	(r47442)
@@ -89,9 +89,9 @@
       allowed to perform operations to the system outside of the
       associated jail environment.</para>
 
-    <para>This chapter provides an overview of jail terminology are
-      how to use &os; jails.  Jails are a powerful tool for system
-      administrators, but their basic usage can also be useful for
+    <para>This chapter provides an overview of the terminology and
+      commands for managing &os; jails.  Jails are a powerful tool for both system
+      administrators, and
       advanced users.</para>
 
     <para>After reading this chapter, you will know:</para>
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