Re: svn commit: r47469 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style
Warren Block <[email protected]>
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On Thu, 1 Oct 2015, Jason Helfman wrote: > On Thu, Oct 1, 2015 at 7:55 AM, Warren Block <[email protected]> wrote: > Author: wblock > Date: Thu Oct 1 14:55:39 2015 > New Revision: 47469 > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47469 > > Log: > Swap two words transposed. > > Modified: > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Thu Oct 1 14:34:32 2015 (r47468) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Thu Oct 1 14:55:39 2015 (r47469) > @@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ > <para>For example, commands:</para> > > <informalexample> > - <para>Wrong: Use the command <command>svn</command> to > + <para>Wrong: Use the <command>svn</command> command to > update sources.</para> > </informalexample> > > _______________________________________________ > [email protected] mailing list > https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-doc-all > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "[email protected]" > > > > Why we are documenting what shouldn't be done? I thought that this was discouraged. It is. This section has been around forever, but a bigger issue is that this type of redundancy is difficult to explain without showing the wrong way. Suggestions welcome. _______________________________________________ [email protected] mailing list https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-doc-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "[email protected]"