svn commit: r47513 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools
Jason Helfman <[email protected]>
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Author: jgh Date: Mon Oct 5 21:45:11 2015 New Revision: 47513 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47513 Log: - cleanup wording in developer's handbook PR: 203441 (based on) Submitted by: [email protected] Approved by: bcr@ (mentor) Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D3821 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.xml Mon Oct 5 14:48:03 2015 (r47512) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.xml Mon Oct 5 21:45:11 2015 (r47513) @@ -221,9 +221,8 @@ <para>Logo is a language that is easy to learn, and has been used as an introductory programming language in various courses. It is an excellent tool to work with - when teaching programming in small ages, as it makes the - creation of elaborate geometric shapes an easy task even - for very small children.</para> + when teaching programming to smaller age groups, as it makes + creation of elaborate geometric shapes an easy task.</para> <para>The latest version of Logo for &os; is available from the Ports Collection in _______________________________________________ [email protected] mailing list https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-doc-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "[email protected]"