svn commit: r47742 - head/share/security/advisories

Gleb Smirnoff <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: glebius (src committer)
Date: Thu Nov  5 11:43:55 2015
New Revision: 47742
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47742

Log:
  Improve wording in recent advisories.
  
  Submitted by:	gavin

Modified:
  head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-EN-15:19.kqueue.asc
  head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-15:25.ntp.asc

Modified: head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-EN-15:19.kqueue.asc
==============================================================================
--- head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-EN-15:19.kqueue.asc	Thu Nov  5 09:32:42 2015	(r47741)
+++ head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-EN-15:19.kqueue.asc	Thu Nov  5 11:43:55 2015	(r47742)
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ pieces of kernel code termed filters.
 II.  Problem Description
 
 Due to int usage for file offsets in the VOP_WRITE_(PRE|POST) macros,
-kqueue(2) write events for files greater 2GB where never fired.
+kqueue(2) write events for files greater 2GB were never fired.
 
 III. Impact
 
@@ -115,19 +115,18 @@ The latest revision of this Errata Notic
 https://security.FreeBSD.org/advisories/FreeBSD-EN-15:19.kqueue.asc
 
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Modified: head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-15:25.ntp.asc
==============================================================================
--- head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-15:25.ntp.asc	Thu Nov  5 09:32:42 2015	(r47741)
+++ head/share/security/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-15:25.ntp.asc	Thu Nov  5 11:43:55 2015	(r47742)
@@ -192,12 +192,12 @@ FreeBSD release branches.
 a) Download the relevant patch from the location below, and verify the
 detached PGP signature using your PGP utility.
 
-[*** v1.1 NOTE ***] If your sources are not yet patched using initial
-advisory patches, then you need to apply full patches named ntp-NNN.patch,
-where NNN stands for the release version.  If your sources are already
-updated, or patched with patches from initial advisory, then you need to
-apply incremental patches, named ntp-NNN-inc.patch, where NNN stands for
-the release version.
+[*** v1.1 NOTE ***] If your sources are not yet patched using the initially
+published advisory patches, then you need to apply the full patches named
+ntp-NNN.patch, where NNN stands for the release version.  If your sources
+are already updated, or patched with patches from the initial advisory,
+then you need to apply incremental patches, named ntp-NNN-inc.patch, where
+NNN stands for the release version.
 
 [FreeBSD 10.2-RELEASE-p5, not patched with initial SA-15:25 patch]
 # fetch https://security.FreeBSD.org/patches/SA-15:25/ntp-102.patch.xz
@@ -217,17 +217,17 @@ the release version.
 # fetch https://security.FreeBSD.org/patches/SA-15:25/ntp-93.patch.asc
 # gpg --verify ntp-93.patch.asc
 
-[FreeBSD 10.2-RELEASE-p6, initial SA-15:25 patch applied]
+[FreeBSD 10.2-RELEASE-p6, initial SA-15:25 patch already applied]
 # fetch https://security.FreeBSD.org/patches/SA-15:25/ntp-102-inc.patch
 # fetch https://security.FreeBSD.org/patches/SA-15:25/ntp-102-inc.patch.asc
 # gpg --verify ntp-102-inc.patch.asc
 
-[FreeBSD 10.1-RELEASE-p23, initial SA-15:25 patch applied]
+[FreeBSD 10.1-RELEASE-p23, initial SA-15:25 patch already applied]
 # fetch https://security.FreeBSD.org/patches/SA-15:25/ntp-101-inc.patch
 # fetch https://security.FreeBSD.org/patches/SA-15:25/ntp-101-inc.patch.asc
 # gpg --verify ntp-101-inc.patch.asc
 
-[FreeBSD 9.3-RELEASE-p29, initial SA-15:25 patch applied]
+[FreeBSD 9.3-RELEASE-p29, initial SA-15:25 patch already applied]
 # fetch https://security.FreeBSD.org/patches/SA-15:25/ntp-93-inc.patch
 # fetch https://security.FreeBSD.org/patches/SA-15:25/ntp-93-inc.patch.asc
 # gpg --verify ntp-93-inc.patch.asc
@@ -290,19 +290,18 @@ https://cve.mitre.org/cgi-bin/cvename.cg
 The latest revision of this advisory is available at
 https://security.FreeBSD.org/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-15:25.ntp.asc
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