svn commit: r47864 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs
Christian Brueffer <[email protected]>
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Author: brueffer Date: Tue Dec 15 18:16:47 2015 New Revision: 47864 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47864 Log: Several minor wording, spelling and grammar improvements. PR: 204704 Submitted by: [email protected] Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml Tue Dec 15 15:01:06 2015 (r47863) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml Tue Dec 15 18:16:47 2015 (r47864) @@ -33,10 +33,10 @@ of core router products, running root name servers, hosting major web sites, and as the foundation for widely used desktop operating systems. This is only possible because of the - diverse and world-wide membership of the + diverse and worldwide membership of the volunteer &os; Project.</p> - <p><b>&os; 10.X</b> introduced many new features + <p><b>&os; 10.X</b> introduces many new features and replaces many legacy tools with updated versions.</p> <ul> @@ -105,16 +105,16 @@ CAPABILITY_MODE have been added to the GENERIC kernel.</li> <li><b>Hhook</b>: (Helper Hook) and khelp(9) (Kernel Helpers) - KPIs have been implemented. These are a superset of + KPIs have been implemented. These are a superset of the pfil(9) framework for more general use in the kernel. The hhook(9) KPI provides a way for kernel subsystems to export - hook points that khelp(9) modules can hook to provide + hook points that khelp(9) modules can hook into to provide enhanced or new functionality to the kernel. The khelp(9) KPI provides a framework for managing khelp(9) modules, which indirectly use the hhook(9) KPI to register their hook functions with hook points of interest within the kernel. - These allow a structured way to dynamically extend the - kernel at runtime in an ABI preserving manner.</li> + Together, they allow a structured way to dynamically extend the + kernel at runtime in an ABI-preserving manner.</li> <li><b>Accounting API</b> has been implemented. It can keep per-process, per-jail, and per-login class resource @@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ implementation and takes user-configurable actions based on the set of rules it maintains and the current resource usage. The rctl(8) utility has been added to manage the - rules in userland. Note that this is neither built nor + rules in userland. Note that this is neither built nor installed by default.</li> <li><b>USB</b> subsystem now supports USB packet filter. _______________________________________________ [email protected] mailing list https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-doc-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "[email protected]"