svn commit: r47915 - head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking

Bjoern Heidotting <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]> 
Author: bhd
Date: Mon Dec 28 19:54:49 2015
New Revision: 47915
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47915

Log:
  - Fix some screen examples
  - Use <package> instead of <filename role="package">

Modified:
  head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml

Modified: head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Mon Dec 28 16:56:33 2015	(r47914)
+++ head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Mon Dec 28 19:54:49 2015	(r47915)
@@ -1513,7 +1513,7 @@ wlan0: flags=8843&lt;UP,BROADCAST,RUNNIN
 	      der Nameserver manuell festgelegt werden:</para>
 
             <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>route add default <replaceable>your_default_router</replaceable></userinput>
-              &prompt.root; <userinput>echo "nameserver <replaceable>your_DNS_server</replaceable>" &gt;&gt; /etc/resolv.conf</userinput></screen>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>echo "nameserver <replaceable>your_DNS_server</replaceable>" &gt;&gt; /etc/resolv.conf</userinput></screen>
 	  </sect5>
 
 	  <sect5 xml:id="network-wireless-wpa-eap-tls">
@@ -3975,15 +3975,10 @@ BEGEMOT-BRIDGE-MIB::begemotBridgeDefault
 	  Schnittstelle mit der <acronym>IP</acronym>-Adresse
 	  <replaceable>10.0.0.3/24</replaceable>:</para>
 
-        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig
-<replaceable>fxp0</replaceable> up</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>fxp1</replaceable>
-up</userinput>
+        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>fxp0</replaceable> up</userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>fxp1</replaceable> up</userinput>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lagg0 create </userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lagg0 up laggproto lacp laggport
-<replaceable>fxp0</replaceable> laggport
-<replaceable>fxp1</replaceable>
-<replaceable>10.0.0.3/24</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lagg0 up laggproto lacp laggport <replaceable>fxp0</replaceable> laggport <replaceable>fxp1</replaceable> <replaceable>10.0.0.3/24</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
 	<para>Überprüfen Sie den Status der virtuellen
 	  Schnittstelle:</para>
@@ -4053,15 +4048,10 @@ ifconfig_<literal>lagg0</literal>="laggp
 	  <acronym>IP</acronym>-Adresse
 	  <replaceable>10.0.0.15/24</replaceable> zugewiesen:</para>
 
-        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig
-<replaceable>fxp0</replaceable> up</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>fxp1</replaceable>
-up</userinput>
+        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>fxp0</replaceable> up</userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>fxp1</replaceable> up</userinput>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lagg0 create</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lagg0 up laggproto failover laggport
-<replaceable>fxp0</replaceable> laggport
-<replaceable>fxp1</replaceable>
-<replaceable>10.0.0.15/24</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lagg0 up laggproto failover laggport <replaceable>fxp0</replaceable> laggport <replaceable>fxp1</replaceable> <replaceable>10.0.0.15/24</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
 	<para>Die virtuelle Schnittstelle sollte in etwa so
 	  aussehen:</para>
@@ -4126,12 +4116,12 @@ ifconfig_<literal>lagg0</literal>="laggp
 
         <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>bge0</replaceable></userinput>
 bge0: flags=8843&lt;UP,BROADCAST,RUNNING,SIMPLEX,MULTICAST&gt; metric 0 mtu 1500
- options=19b&lt;RXCSUM,TXCSUM,VLAN_MTU,VLAN_HWTAGGING,VLAN_HWCSUM,TSO4&gt;
- ether 00:21:70:da:ae:37
- inet6 fe80::221:70ff:feda:ae37%bge0 prefixlen 64 scopeid 0x2
- nd6 options=29&lt;PERFORMNUD,IFDISABLED,AUTO_LINKLOCAL&gt;
- media: Ethernet autoselect (1000baseT &lt;full-duplex&gt;)
- status: active</screen>
+	options=19b&lt;RXCSUM,TXCSUM,VLAN_MTU,VLAN_HWTAGGING,VLAN_HWCSUM,TSO4&gt;
+	ether 00:21:70:da:ae:37
+	inet6 fe80::221:70ff:feda:ae37%bge0 prefixlen 64 scopeid 0x2
+	nd6 options=29&lt;PERFORMNUD,IFDISABLED,AUTO_LINKLOCAL&gt;
+	media: Ethernet autoselect (1000baseT &lt;full-duplex&gt;)
+	status: active</screen>
 
 	<para>Ersetzen Sie <replaceable>bge0</replaceable> durch den
 	  Namen der Ethernet-Schnittstelle des Systems.  Die
@@ -4141,16 +4131,12 @@ bge0: flags=8843&lt;UP,BROADCAST,RUNNING
 	  <acronym>MAC</acronym>-Adresse der zugrunde liegenden
 	  drahtlosen Schnittstelle:</para>
 
-        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig
-<replaceable>iwn0</replaceable> ether
-<replaceable>00:21:70:da:ae:37</replaceable></userinput></screen>
+        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>iwn0</replaceable> ether <replaceable>00:21:70:da:ae:37</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
 	<para>Starten Sie die drahtlose Schnittstelle, aber ohne
 	  eine <acronym>IP</acronym>-Adresse zu setzen:</para>
 
-        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig wlan0 create wlandev
-<replaceable>iwn0</replaceable> ssid
-<replaceable>my_router</replaceable> up</userinput></screen>
+        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig wlan0 create wlandev <replaceable>iwn0</replaceable> ssid <replaceable>my_router</replaceable> up</userinput></screen>
 
 	<para>Stellen Sie sicher, dass die
 	  <replaceable>bge0</replaceable>-Schnittstelle aktiv ist.
@@ -4158,11 +4144,9 @@ bge0: flags=8843&lt;UP,BROADCAST,RUNNING
 	  <replaceable>bge0</replaceable> als Master und
 	  <replaceable>wlan0</replaceable> als Failover:</para>
 
-        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig
-<replaceable>bge0</replaceable> up</userinput>
+        <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>bge0</replaceable> up</userinput>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lagg0 create</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lagg0 up laggproto failover laggport
-<replaceable>bge0</replaceable> laggport wlan0</userinput></screen>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lagg0 up laggproto failover laggport <replaceable>bge0</replaceable> laggport wlan0</userinput></screen>
 
 	<para>Die virtuelle Schnittstelle sollte in etwa so
 	  aussehen:</para>
@@ -4415,8 +4399,7 @@ DHCP"</programlisting>
 	    herunterladen können, der über <acronym>PXE</acronym>
 	    bereitgestellt wird:</para>
 
-          <screen>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>tftp localhost</userinput>
+          <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>tftp localhost</userinput>
 tftp> <userinput>get FreeBSD/install/boot/pxeboot</userinput>
 Received 264951 bytes in 0.1 seconds
           </screen>
@@ -4480,13 +4463,10 @@ Received 264951 bytes in 0.1 seconds
 	Verzeichnisse über Speicher-Dateisysteme (memory backed file
 	system) einbinden.</para>
 
-      <screen>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>chroot ${NFSROOTDIR}</userinput>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>chroot ${NFSROOTDIR}</userinput>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir -p conf/base</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>tar -c -v -f conf/base/etc.cpio.gz --format cpio
---gzip etc</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>tar -c -v -f conf/base/var.cpio.gz --format cpio
---gzip var</userinput></screen>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>tar -c -v -f conf/base/etc.cpio.gz --format cpio --gzip etc</userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>tar -c -v -f conf/base/var.cpio.gz --format cpio --gzip var</userinput></screen>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="network-pxe-setting-up-dhcp">
@@ -4570,8 +4550,7 @@ host corbieres {
 	  <para>Starten Sie anschließend den
 	    <acronym>DHCP</acronym>-Dienst:</para>
 
-          <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service isc-dhcpd
-start</userinput></screen>
+          <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service isc-dhcpd start</userinput></screen>
       </sect2>
 
 <!--
@@ -4808,9 +4787,8 @@ cd /usr/src/etc; make distribution</prog
 
       <procedure>
         <step>
-	  <para>Benutzen Sie den <filename
-	      role="package">net/wireshark</filename> Port um
-            Fehler im Netzwerkverkehr während des Bootvorgangs
+	  <para>Benutzen Sie den <package>net/wireshark</package> Port
+	    um Fehler im Netzwerkverkehr während des Bootvorgangs
             von <acronym>PXE</acronym> zu finden.  Der
             Bootvorgang wird im folgenden Diagramm schematisch
             dargestellt.</para>
@@ -4901,8 +4879,7 @@ Received 264951 bytes in 0.1 seconds</sc
             <filename>/usr/local/etc/dhcpd.conf</filename>
 	    wie folgt testen:</para>
 
-          <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount -t nfs 192.168.0.1:/b
-/tftpboot/FreeBSD/install /mnt</userinput></screen>
+          <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount -t nfs 192.168.0.1:/b/tftpboot/FreeBSD/install /mnt</userinput></screen>
         </step>
       </procedure>
     </sect2>
@@ -5850,8 +5827,7 @@ class="ipaddress">192.168.1.51</systemit
 	<acronym>IP</acronym>-Adresse wieder an den Master-Server
 	zurückzugeben:</para>
 
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig em0 vhid 1 state
-backup</userinput></screen>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig em0 vhid 1 state backup</userinput></screen>
 
       <para>An dieser Stelle muss entweder das Netzwerk neu gestartet,
 	oder die Maschine neu gebootet werden, um
@@ -5883,8 +5859,7 @@ backup</userinput></screen>
       <para>Die <acronym>CARP</acronym>-Schnittstellen selbst können
 	mittels &man.ifconfig.8; erstellt werden:</para>
 
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig carp0
-create</userinput></screen>
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig carp0 create</userinput></screen>
 
       <para>Konfigurieren Sie Hostnamen,
 	<acronym>IP</acronym>-Management-Adresse, die gemeinsam

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