svn commit: r48037 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status
Benjamin Kaduk <[email protected]>
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Author: bjk
Date: Sun Jan 17 02:27:55 2016
New Revision: 48037
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48037
Log:
A couple grammar/style tweaks from koobs
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml Sat Jan 16 18:29:11 2016 (r48036)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml Sun Jan 17 02:27:55 2016 (r48037)
@@ -2490,7 +2490,7 @@
<p>The Security Team reorganisation, first proposed to Core
during a meeting at BSDCan this year by Gleb Smirnoff — core
- member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer — has now
+ member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer (SO) — has now
been accomplished. In order to improve the project's
responsiveness to security alerts, to maintain security on
privileged information received in confidence before general
@@ -2502,7 +2502,7 @@
security problems, and connecting them with appropriate
individuals within the project with the technical expertise to
address the identified concerns. The SO team was cut down to just
- the Security Officer and his deputy, assisted by a secretary, and
+ the Security Officer and their deputy, assisted by a secretary, and
with input and help in drafting security advisories from former
and any potential future Security Officers plus liasons with Core,
Cluster Administration and Release Engineering.</p>
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