svn commit: r48259 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks

Warren Block <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: wblock
Date: Fri Feb 26 05:02:01 2016
New Revision: 48259
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48259

Log:
  Make text slightly less passive.  Inspired by the patch submitted in the
  PR.
  
  PR:		207505
  Submitted by:	Erik Gunderson <[email protected]>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Fri Feb 26 04:59:09 2016	(r48258)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Fri Feb 26 05:02:01 2016	(r48259)
@@ -918,10 +918,10 @@ scsibus1:
       <para>Occasionally, <errorname>Device not configured</errorname>
 	will be displayed when trying to mount a data
 	<acronym>CD</acronym>.  This usually means that the
-	<acronym>CD</acronym> drive thinks that there is no disk in
+	<acronym>CD</acronym> drive has not detected a disk in
 	the tray, or that the drive is not visible on the bus.  It
 	can take a couple of seconds for a <acronym>CD</acronym>
-	drive to realize that a media is present, so be
+	drive to detect media, so be
 	patient.</para>
 
       <para>Sometimes, a <acronym>SCSI</acronym>
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