svn commit: r48532 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config

Author: wblock
Date: Sun Apr  3 22:16:21 2016
New Revision: 48532
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48532

Log:
  Fix ifconfig output to use actual tabs.  Remove some passivity and a
  couple of instances of "you" and "your".

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml	Sun Apr  3 22:07:49 2016	(r48531)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml	Sun Apr  3 22:16:21 2016	(r48532)
@@ -955,10 +955,10 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,M
 	to:</para>
 
       <screen>dc0: flags=8843&lt;BROADCAST,SIMPLEX,MULTICAST&gt; metric 0 mtu 1500
-        options=80008&lt;VLAN_MTU,LINKSTATE&gt;
-        ether 00:a0:cc:da:da:da
-        media: Ethernet autoselect (100baseTX &lt;full-duplex&gt;)
-        status: active</screen>
+	options=80008&lt;VLAN_MTU,LINKSTATE&gt;
+	ether 00:a0:cc:da:da:da
+	media: Ethernet autoselect (100baseTX &lt;full-duplex&gt;)
+	status: active</screen>
 
       <para>it would indicate the card has not been configured.</para>
 
@@ -968,12 +968,12 @@ lo0: flags=8049&lt;UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,M
 	command line with &man.ifconfig.8; but will not persist after
 	a reboot unless the configuration is also added to
 	<filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>.  If a
-	<acronym>DHCP</acronym> server is present on your LAN, you
-	will just have to add the following line:</para>
+	<acronym>DHCP</acronym> server is present on the LAN,
+	just add this line:</para>
 
       <programlisting>ifconfig_dc0="DHCP"</programlisting>
 
-      <para>Replace <filename>dc0</filename> with the correct value
+      <para>Replace <replaceable>dc0</replaceable> with the correct value
 	for the system.</para>
 
       <para>The line added, then, follow the instructions given in
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