svn commit: r48680 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Benjamin Kaduk <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: bjk
Date: Wed Apr 20 03:34:18 2016
New Revision: 48680
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48680

Log:
  Editorial tweaks to the 2016Q1 report
  
  Remove some unnecessary quotes, and use &quot; where they remain.
  (Also sprinkle some more <tt>.)
  
  Try to use title case for <url> descriptions, and convert a few
  FreeBSD into &os;.
  
  And more.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml	Wed Apr 20 01:10:07 2016	(r48679)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-01-2016-03.xml	Wed Apr 20 03:34:18 2016	(r48680)
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@
     </contact>
 
     <links>
-      <url href="http://www.viva64.com/en/b/0377/">PVS-Studio delved into the FreeBSD kernel</url>
+      <url href="http://www.viva64.com/en/b/0377/">PVS-Studio Delved into the FreeBSD kernel</url>
       <url href="https://reviews.freebsd.org/D5245">PVS Static Analysis Phabricator Review</url>
     </links>
 
@@ -221,18 +221,18 @@
 
       <p>Work is ongoing with respect to development of pNFS support
 	for the NFS server using GlusterFS as a back end.  This will
-	be a long term project with the eventual goal of allowing the
+	be a long-term project with the eventual goal of allowing the
 	NFS server to scale beyond a single server system.  Hopefully
 	it will be available for testing in late Spring 2016.  pNFS
-	allows a NFSv4.1 client to do reads/writes directly to a data
+	allows an NFSv4.1 client to do reads/writes directly to a data
 	server and not the NFS server.</p>
     </body>
 
     <help>
       <task>
-	<p>Development of the pNFS server will be in need of testing
-	  or it will never progress to a near production status.  I
-	  hope to have code available in FreeBSD's subversion projects
+	<p>The pNFS server will be in need of testing during development
+	  or it will never progress to a near-production status.  I
+	  hope to have code available in &os;'s Subversion project
 	  branch for testing in late spring 2016.</p>
       </task>
     </help>
@@ -252,21 +252,22 @@
     </contact>
 
     <links>
-      <url href="https://svnweb.freebsd.org/base/projects/powerpcspe/">Source tree</url>
+      <url href="https://svnweb.freebsd.org/base/projects/powerpcspe/">Source Tree</url>
     </links>
 
     <body>
-      <p>The purpose of this is to enable use of the Signal Processing
+      <p>This project aims to enable the use of the Signal Processing
 	Engine found in the NXP/Freescale e500v2 SoC.  The SPE uses
-	opcodes overlapping with Altivec, so is mutually exclusive.
-	Additionally, the e500v2 does not have a traditional FPU, and
-	instead uses the SPE for all floating point operations (or
-	emulation as is currently done).  Combined with the fact that
-	the SPE ABI is incompatible with traditional ABI, a new
-	MACHINE_ARCH is created to address this.</p>
+	opcodes overlapping with those of Altivec, so they are mutually
+	exclusive.  Additionally, the e500v2 does not have a traditional
+	FPU, and instead uses the SPE for all floating point operations
+	(or emulation, as is currently done).  Combined with the fact
+	that the SPE ABI is incompatible with the traditional ABI, a new
+	MACHINE_ARCH has been created to address these
+	incompatibilities.</p>
 
-      <p>A project branch has been created with the work.  A
-	powerpcspe kernel boots on the RouterBoard RB800, and base
+      <p>A project branch has been created for the work.  A
+	powerpcspe kernel boots on the RouterBoard RB800, and the base
 	utilities run properly.</p>
     </body>
 
@@ -294,12 +295,12 @@
     </contact>
 
     <links>
-      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/Graphics">Graphics stack roadmap and supported hardware matrix</url>
-      <url href="https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-ports-graphics">Ports development tree on GitHub</url>
+      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/Graphics">Graphics Stack Roadmap and Supported Hardware Matrix</url>
+      <url href="https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-ports-graphics">Ports Development Tree on GitHub</url>
       <url href="https://fosdem.org/2016/schedule/event/freebsd_graphic_stack/">FreeBSD Graphics Team at FOSDEM 2016</url>
-      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCodeIdeas#Devices_management:_link_.2Fdev_entries_to_sysctl_nodes">GSoC 2016: link /dev entries to sysctl nodes</url>
-      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCodeIdeas#Devices_management:_redesign_and_rewrite_libdevq">GSoC 2016: redesign libdevq</url>
-      <url href="http://planet.freebsd.org/graphics/">Graphics team blog</url>
+      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCodeIdeas#Devices_management:_link_.2Fdev_entries_to_sysctl_nodes">GSoC 2016: link <tt>/dev</tt> Entries to <tt>sysctl</tt> Nodes</url>
+      <url href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCodeIdeas#Devices_management:_redesign_and_rewrite_libdevq">GSoC 2016: Redesign <tt>libdevq</tt></url>
+      <url href="http://planet.freebsd.org/graphics/">Graphics Team Blog</url>
     </links>
 
     <body>
@@ -307,7 +308,8 @@
 	driver in the kernel!  The driver now matches Linux 3.8.13, so
 	it includes initial Haswell support.  Linux 3.8 is already
 	three years old, but work continues to upgrade DRM further.
-	In particular, the move to <tt>linuxkpi</tt> was started.</p>
+	In particular, work commenced to move to using the
+	<tt>linuxkpi</tt> compatibility.</p>
 
       <p>In the Ports tree, Mesa was updated to 11.1.2. The next minor
 	release, 11.2.0, is ready for testing in our development tree.
@@ -321,21 +323,22 @@
 	how people can contribute.  It was well received and the
 	presentation was followed by interesting discussions.  FOSDEM
 	was also a nice occasion to meet and talk again to the nice
-	"upstream" developers of the graphics stack.</p>
+	upstream developers of the graphics stack.</p>
 
       <p>For the first year, we added two ideas for GSoC 2016: one for
 	a kernel task, one to redesign <tt>libdevq</tt>.  Six students
-	submitted a proposal for those two ideas, that was unexpected!
+	submitted proposals for those ideas; that was unexpected!
 	We now need to decide which one we want to mentor and the
 	choice is difficult.</p>
 
-      <p>Our blog has moved to
-	<a href="http://planet.freebsd.org/graphics/">Graphics Team blog</a>.</p>
+      <p>Our blog has moved to a
+	<a href="http://planet.freebsd.org/graphics/">new location</a>
+	(linked above).</p>
     </body>
 
     <help>
       <task>
-	<p>See the "Graphics" wiki page for up-to-date
+	<p>See the &quot;Graphics&quot; wiki page for up-to-date
 	  information.</p>
       </task>
     </help>
@@ -367,11 +370,11 @@
     </links>
 
     <body>
-      <p>Allwinner SoC are used in multiple hobbyist devboards and
-	single board computers.  Recently, support for these SoC have
+      <p>Allwinner SoCs are used in multiple hobbyist devboards and
+	single-board computers.  Recently, support for these SoCs has
 	received a lot of updates</p>
 
-      <p>Task done during first quarter :</p>
+      <p>Task done during first quarter:</p>
 
       <ul>
 	<li>I2C</li>
@@ -397,13 +400,13 @@
 	<li>A20 now uses the ARM Generic Timer</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>Ongoing task :</p>
+      <p>Ongoing tasks:</p>
 
       <ul>
-	<li>Switch to new clock framework
+	<li>Switch to a new clock framework
 	  <a href="https://reviews.freebsd.org/D5752">(In review)</a></li>
 
-	<li>Convert A10 interrupt controller to INTRNG
+	<li>Convert the A10 interrupt controller to INTRNG
 	  <a href="https://reviews.freebsd.org/D5573">(In review)</a></li>
 
 	<li>OHCI support
@@ -417,7 +420,7 @@
 
 	<li>USB OTG</li>
 
-	<li>Finish the switch to upstream DTS</li>
+	<li>Finish the switch to using upstream DTS files</li>
 
 	<li>A83T SoC Support</li>
 
@@ -521,7 +524,7 @@
 
 
     <body>
-      <p>Since the last report &os; support for ThunderX has been
+      <p>Since the last report, &os; support for ThunderX has been
 	significantly improved and stabilized.  Semihalf contributions
 	include the following items:</p>
 
@@ -531,14 +534,14 @@
 	  maintained.</li>
 
 	<li>Moved to using <tt>pci_host_generic.c</tt> as a main
-	  driver for the internal PCIe bridge.  Significant rework of
-	  PCIe code to support both generic and ThunderX based
-	  platforms.</li>
+	  driver for the internal PCIe bridge.  This involved a
+	  significant rework of PCIe code to support both generic and
+	  ThunderX based platforms.</li>
 
-	<li> Serious networking performance boost and bug fixes: </li>
+	<li> Serious networking performance boost and bug fixes:</li>
 	  <ul>
-	    <li>Fixed race condition on Rx path causing very rare
-	      ‘use after free’ issue</li>
+	    <li>Fixed race condition on Rx path causing a very rare
+	      &quot;use after free&quot; issue</li>
 
 	    <li>Hardware L3 and L4 checksums support</li>
 
@@ -553,7 +556,7 @@
       </ul>
 
       <p>The driver supports all available Ethernet connections (1,
-	10, 30 Gbps) and system can saturate 10 Gbps link (on Tx)
+	10, 30 Gbps) and the system can saturate a 10 Gbps link (on Tx)
 	using 4 CPU cores.</p>
 
       <ul>
@@ -570,7 +573,7 @@
 	  </ul>
       </ul>
 
-      <p>This work is integrated to the FreeBSD HEAD on an on-going
+      <p>This work is integrated to &os; HEAD on an on-going
 	basis.</p>
     </body>
 
@@ -584,7 +587,7 @@
 
     <help>
       <task>
-	<p>Support for multi Queue Set operation in VNIC</p>
+	<p>Add support for multi-Queue Set operation in VNIC.</p>
       </task>
     </help>
   </project>
_______________________________________________
[email protected] mailing list
https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-doc-all
To unsubscribe, send any mail to "[email protected]"
lmpx.com only provides a reader for public news (NNTP) servers. It is not affiliated with the servers or forums shown here and is not responsible for the content of articles, which is written by their respective authors.