svn commit: r49287 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook: slow-porting testing

Brad Davis <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.os.freebsd.devel.cvs.doc
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Author: brd
Date: Tue Aug 16 12:14:37 2016
New Revision: 49287
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49287

Log:
  A couple small gender bias fixes.  Plus simplify wording around installing
  and using poudriere.
  
  Reported by:	koobs

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/slow-porting/chapter.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/testing/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/slow-porting/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/slow-porting/chapter.xml	Tue Aug 16 08:00:52 2016	(r49286)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/slow-porting/chapter.xml	Tue Aug 16 12:14:37 2016	(r49287)
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ DOS2UNIX_WRKSRC=	${WRKDIR}</programlisti
       install, set <varname>IS_INTERACTIVE</varname> in the
       <filename>Makefile</filename>.  This will allow
       <quote>overnight builds</quote> to skip it.  If the user
-      sets the variable <envar>BATCH</envar> in his environment (and
+      sets the variable <envar>BATCH</envar> in their environment (and
       if the user sets the variable <envar>INTERACTIVE</envar>, then
       <emphasis>only</emphasis> those ports requiring interaction are
       built).  This will save a lot of wasted time on the set of

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/testing/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/testing/chapter.xml	Tue Aug 16 08:00:52 2016	(r49286)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/testing/chapter.xml	Tue Aug 16 12:14:37 2016	(r49287)
@@ -181,9 +181,8 @@
       <para>All these tests are done automatically when running
 	<command>poudriere testport</command> or <command>poudriere
 	  bulk -t</command>.  It is highly recommended that every
-	ports contributor install it, and tests all his ports with it.
-	See <xref linkend="testing-poudriere"/> for more
-	information.</para>
+	ports contributor install and test their ports with it.  See
+	<xref linkend="testing-poudriere"/> for more information.</para>
     </tip>
   </sect1>
 
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