svn commit: r49444 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs
Mark Linimon <[email protected]>
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Author: linimon
Date: Sat Oct 1 13:07:05 2016
New Revision: 49444
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49444
Log:
Fix some awkward wording and style problems.
PR: 213061
Reviewed by: allanjude
Approved by: allanjude
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml Fri Sep 30 18:33:07 2016 (r49443)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml Sat Oct 1 13:07:05 2016 (r49444)
@@ -21,6 +21,9 @@
<h2>Choosing an Architecture</h2>
+ <p>Most users of &os; will have hardware for either the amd64,
+ i386, or armv6 architectures.</p>
+
<p>Modern PCs use the amd64 architecture, including those with
Intel® branded processors. Computers with more than
3 GB of memory should use amd64. If the computer is an
@@ -29,6 +32,10 @@
Bone Black, Panda Board, and Zed Board, use the armv6 SD card
image which supports ARMv6 and ARMv7 processors.</p>
+ <p>All other users should reference the
+ <a href="&base;/platforms/index.html">complete list</a>
+ of supported &os; platforms.</p>
+
<a name="choose-image"></a>
<h2>Choosing an Image</h2>
@@ -38,7 +45,7 @@
(bootonly) sized ISO
Disc Images, as well as regular and mini USB memory stick
images. Later versions of &os; are also offered as prebuilt
- expandable Virtual Machine images, and as SD Cards for embedded
+ expandable Virtual Machine images, and as SD Card images for embedded
platforms.</p>
<a name="help-statistics"></a>
@@ -329,7 +336,7 @@
<p>If you plan on getting &os; via HTTP or FTP, please check
the listing of <a
href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors-ftp.html"><strong>mirror
- sites</strong></a> in the handbook to see if there is a site
+ sites</strong></a> in the Handbook to see if there is a site
closer to you.</p>
<a name="install"></a>
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